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FALL IN LOVE

F eeling enraptured, Autumn dances in the wind, then undresses. A s bright robes fall to the ground, her passion paints the twilight skies. L ike a nymph, she beckons, tossing her fiery auburn tresses. L ongingly she sighs - September’s bliss lingering in her eyes. I ndian summer days come; then they go. N ights though chill, embrace her in indigo. L ater, in November, her sweetness wanes. O ctober cannot stay forever loving her. V acantly she gazes through freezing rains. E ndearments whispered - cease - when Fall loses ardor.

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Date: 4/6/2020 10:28:00 AM
wa ooo, nice one. just stop over to smiles again because the coronavirus has taken smiles of people this is really nice poem.
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Date: 4/1/2020 1:18:00 PM
Andrea, I just stumbled upon this gem, and so glad I did! Apparently it is well loved in the Soup world with over 10,000 views and 4 pages of comments. You are well-loved and deeply appreciated here by your fellow Soupers, deservedly so. This short acrostic takes us through the entire scope of autumn from Indian Summer to frosty, wistful winter. A delight to read, and another fav for me ~ John
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Date: 2/26/2020 5:43:00 PM
Stunning Acrostic, Andrea.
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Date: 2/26/2020 1:21:00 PM
Andrea Dietrich, Beautifully done. Have a nice day my fiend. Hugs.
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Date: 7/16/2019 7:31:00 PM
I love this type of poem. Excellently written of course. Ann
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Date: 12/26/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for writing a great poem!
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Date: 5/26/2018 10:48:00 PM
I just found this under "Best Acrostic", it is the first one and, Andrea, it is beautiful, absolutely love the feeling it gives thru perfect imagery. A Wow! A soaring wow. Wanted you to know. Love, CayCay
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:29:00 PM
Awesome poem Andrea. Love it.
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:11:00 PM
A great piece . It's so deep . Keep it up.
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Date: 6/16/2017 10:26:00 PM
I should try writing acrostic. This is very nice and romantic. Congrats on the win. As I said before I'm trying to read 3-5 of yours at one time. :)
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Date: 3/15/2017 8:12:00 AM
Hello, Andrea! Congratulations for your acrostic. Rita.
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:26:00 AM
How romantic comparing nature to falling in love...congrats on your placement lovely Andrea :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful write...Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:19:00 PM
The Autumn romance....ending at the Thanksgiving Dance. Some hot and steamy personification heading for a chilly end. Thanks for dropping this on in the contest
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Date: 9/13/2016 12:48:00 PM
A really good nature poetry, Andrea. It makes me fall in true love with autumn.
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Date: 5/11/2016 11:21:00 AM
Just ran across this beauty Andrea. Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:11:00 AM
Andrea who knows everything.....Did you know that I went to Best Acrostic List clicked on it...and Up came Andrea....Congratulations.....I agree you are the best and your poetry travels right along beside you! Judy
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Date: 11/29/2015 6:29:00 PM
September’s bliss lingering in her eyes.Love that line. For me it would be Oct bliss :) Yes, thats the scene where hes taking her out to shoot her . On FX Fargo I think I should of wrote drove away :) Oh, this is 7 for sure :)
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Date: 11/8/2015 11:26:00 AM
This really is an elegant little poem - An enchanting write! My warmest regards, Andrea. :-) john P.s A Seven!
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Date: 10/16/2015 9:30:00 PM
Wonderful win, Andrea. SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:38:00 PM
A real beauty Andrea...her sweetness certainly does wane in November...congrats on another #1 :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:46:00 PM
lovely acrostic here, andrea, very good personification of fall - congrats on your top win! :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea!
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:43:00 AM
This is exceptionally beautiful, Andie! It is the quality of poetry I yearn to write!Congratulations on your top win, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations
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