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she ascends stone steps strewn with bright flying leaves . . . her spirit lifts she swirls to silence for an audience of trees . . . sunlight streams autumn's shine reflects in her eyes of amber 10/22/15 for Brian Strand's Fusion Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/12/2020 9:54:00 PM
This is gorgeous. Congrats!
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:09:00 PM
Delicious, warm colors of autumn in your striking "swirling" imagery and alliteration my friend! Love the "amber eyes" as my eyes have been described as that color. Had a Bengal tiger in the zoo look me in the eye with a puzzling look! Congratulations on your win! Warm blessings to you!
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:03:00 AM
I love this! It's a beauty. God bless you and Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 3:57:00 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous, Andrea! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings!
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Date: 9/21/2016 12:51:00 PM
Couldn't agree more, this is a brilliant piece as always. Congrats, Andrea. ;)
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:58:00 AM
A vivid victory, congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 9/21/2016 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations dear Andrea, the autumn panorama witnessed through this lady in the woods by the reader flowing through your words like real....loved it, love, ANU:)
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:24:00 AM
So great to see this beauty take top honors Andrea. Congratulations! 7 : )
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Date: 9/20/2016 9:06:00 PM
A 7 for this great WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:53:00 PM
So beautiful, I love the imagery. Congrats on your win, Andrea. Agnes
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:36:00 PM
It reads like a song. Lovely haiku. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:52:00 PM
Lovely imagery in the 'audience of tree' and also mirrored in 'her amber eyes.' Love this, Andrea, and congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/20/2016 4:17:00 PM
Absolutely stunning haiku Andrea many many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2016 3:58:00 PM
such beauty Andrea :) I wasn't surprised to see your name with this poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:40:00 PM
Autumns come and autumns go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2015 10:45:00 AM
Excellent! Congratulation to win Anisha
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:45:00 AM
Autumn is a real beauty n u hv expressed it so well Andrea! Big congrats on ur superb win!
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Date: 10/29/2015 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Andrea, nicely written :)
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Date: 10/28/2015 2:28:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis
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Date: 10/28/2015 2:27:00 PM
Wonderful Andrea...I tried a slightly unconventional slant on the amber eye photo also but failed to make the cut :( Big congrats to you!
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Date: 10/28/2015 6:58:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on your excellent win!!!
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Date: 10/28/2015 6:58:00 AM
Wonderful autumn! Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 10/28/2015 1:15:00 AM
Andrea. Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/27/2015 6:11:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful! A 7 and a fav! You should really think about Rattle's Ekphrastic challenge. Your words bring pictures to life.
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