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Holy Is the Lamb

I thought I knew the answers I thought I could go it alone I thought my way into a corner I thought Mary's little lamb was a fairy tale Am I the sum of what I think? I think I am not wanted I think I am not good enough I think I am invisible I think I think I think something is missing I need a fleece as white as snow Shall I go? Go through the valley of the shadow? Go to the mountain top? I have gone many places Every where I went I was told The Lamb was sure to go! Holy is the Lamb Holy is the child of Mary Holy is His blood stained fleece Holy is His sacrifice White Spotless white My soul white and clean Washed by Jesus's holy blood Holy is the Lamb Holy is the Lamb With fleece as white as snow! For Verlena's contest.

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Cona Adams

Date: 10/12/2014 12:27:00 PM

Love this poem, Richard. The flow is smooth, the repetition is spot on. It's a WOW!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/12/2014 1:02:00 PM

Wow back, thanks for this great comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2014 12:27:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/6/2014 12:18:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Richard. I'm glad you placed so well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2014 11:36:00 AM

- A wonderful 2nd place in the contest,Richard - A pleasure to read your suggestions, clever writing! - CONGRATULATIONS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2014 10:41:00 AM

Dear Richard, Wow! I absolutely adore the way you worked the nursery rhyme into your feelings about the Holy Lamb of Christ. I do believe that wherever we go, the Lamb follows us or even leads us. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/6/2014 9:01:00 AM

Hi Richard, Interesting write. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a great day. Earl

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/6/2014 8:41:00 AM

Congrats on the win Richard.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/6/2014 7:05:00 AM

nicely penned poem, congrats on the win, richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/5/2014 10:25:00 PM

Beautiful write Richard. I gave high marks for this gem... Congratulations! Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/6/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Verlena.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/26/2014 8:42:00 AM

I love this one! Favorite! The line "I thought my way into a corner" Oh if I had a penny for every time I have done that, I may be rich now.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2014 9:21:00 AM

You are rich in all the ways that matter.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/23/2014 2:30:00 PM

truly outstanding beautiful pen adoring lovely piece in his beautiful light bless you richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 8:02:00 PM

Thanks Liam

Funom Makama

Date: 9/23/2014 12:37:00 PM

Yes, Holy is the Lamb that was slain for our sins. Every word, every line, every thought and expression was so smooth and perfect. I hope you win. Its been a while Richard. I hope you are doing well.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 12:39:00 PM

So nice to have your visit Funom.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/23/2014 5:09:00 AM

Wow this is powerful Richard, especially from where i read it...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:46:00 AM

Hi Harry, when you visit I am left with a smile. I appreciate that, thanks Harry.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/22/2014 8:45:00 PM

Wow, Richard this is not what one would expect under this title. We all harbor such thoughts through life but the lamb is always there to make us worthy.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:45:00 AM

How true Brenda. We are all the children of a King yet we choose to conduct ourselves as paupers. So many of us do not see ourselves with loving eyes.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/22/2014 6:19:00 PM

Stunning write my friend...LOVE the repetition and the way you used a nursery rhyme we all know as the premise, making the poem all the more compelling ...You got a winner here - Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:42:00 AM

I hope you are right, thanks Tim.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/22/2014 5:55:00 PM

This is inspiring Richard. It spoke to me in a whisper and grabbed my heart fully.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:41:00 AM

I enjoyed this poetic comment Maurice.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2014 11:20:00 AM

love the way you have combined the nursery rhyme into your poem - very clever write Richard:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:38:00 AM

I'm pleased you noticed. Hugs back.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/22/2014 10:31:00 AM

Beautiful, Richard. The only love that is unchangeable and unconditional. You have portrayed this so very well. It speaks volumes to your faith. Good luck on the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thanks for the good wishes.