Beneath the shattered
I am willing
Is not fatal
Are born to be
From the outer
Hide the beauty
For all the world
All the beauty
Brings them pleasure
Up from their soul
To all who are
I decided to call this a "Mussetle Train" try one out it is fun.
2 4 2 non rhyming take a word from the end of each stanza(car)
and use a derivative of it to form the premise of the next car in the train.
I am playing with a non rhyming vesion of the Musette form.
The last word of each stanza forms the premise of the next.
Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2014
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