A Rare Place

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He wandered far from the well trodden path
into the forest dense. Tall trees, that spread 
under a canopy of gold and green,
allowed the late afternoon sun to pierce
the tiny gaps between the foliage.
Reflecting shafts of milky white vapour
like heavenly arrows of silken gauze
arising way beyond the highest tree.
The air was silent, only nature breathed.
The man sat down beside a grassy knoll
his body resting on the gentle slope.
Unburdened by the cares of day, he slept.


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Margaret Foster
 Written.  3rd September 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Incredible imagery - you painted such a peaceful scene:-) many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xxx
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September 30, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem Margaret.
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Soothing images, congrats on the win, Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:12 AM
this is so interesting how you describe this place and in the end, all so he can go to sleep in this most restful and beautiful place Very nice, Margaret.
Fraine Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Such images of a man getting away we all need to get away somedays
Sirak Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 6:37 AM
Lush, peaceful images. I have been known to wander in the forest looking for places like this that beckon you to sit and rest and just be. I am faving this one.
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