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As the old year grows cold and grey, I stand on an ocean of time, holding my dreams like bright balloons. Based on visual #1 Written 12/31/14 by Andrea Dietrich For the 3 by 8 Image Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 3/20/2015 4:35:00 PM
Another year my friend and need some of those balloons popped under me. Having a hard time to get motivated this year. A real down year somehow. love phyl
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Date: 1/12/2015 4:36:00 PM
As we sail on the sea's of our dreams. May the waves shimmer with bright moon beams. Awesome picture. Awesome poem. We always need to hold on tight to that pretty tomorrow. Thanks for the thought baloons. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:45:00 PM
ANDREA,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
Way to go ..It is a winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2015 2:14:00 PM
No matter what happens in life, always hold on tight to your dreams... Congrats on the win with this creative poem, Andrea!... Thank you so much for the kind congrats. I truly appreciate it!
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Date: 1/11/2015 1:44:00 PM
Dear Andrea! Beautiful poem -short in words but long in meaning. I also admire the visual selected. Love. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/8/2015 2:18:00 AM
Oh, I like what you came up with Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea, your lovely words so echo the feeling in that picture! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:52:00 PM
Oh I like it! grats on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:20:00 PM
I love this poem. Congratulations on your win Andrea.
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:04:00 PM
Hey I missed this one - many many congrats Andrea - simply stunning:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful...congrats Andrea :)
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:16:00 AM
A superb poem that goes well with the visual,congrats on the win Andrea...huggs
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:13:00 AM
stunning imagery; I like your metaphors, andie... fascinated!.. thanks for lighting my contest and big congrats!
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Date: 1/7/2015 8:33:00 AM
Nice interpretation of the picture's theme, Andrea, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/7/2015 4:26:00 AM
Lovely write Andrea! congrats on fine win! missed many contests last wk!
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:58:00 AM
Love sweet Andrea dear. Congrats on win.Your friend RAJAT
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Date: 1/6/2015 8:53:00 AM
This verse is perfect for the picture! A fav for me. Can I put it in the journal I keep with inspirational and meaningful quotes?
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:57:00 AM
I really like your interpretation of this image, as well. It was clever tying it in with a New Year's theme. Very nicely done, Andrea! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:20:00 PM
Andrea, I haven't heard from you in a long time. I like this and also the poem you wrote about the coming of spring. It is good to be looking ahead if only a bit. I hope you are well. In any case, I am sick in the head---I don't know why these crazy ideas come to me about things to write about. I hope I can bring a warm laugh to all. Have a great 2015. You are a saint!!
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Date: 1/4/2015 11:10:00 AM
Three incredibly poignant lines, Andrea...wonderful!! :) john.
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:42:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Very expressive for so few lines..Sara
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:19:00 AM
One of the loveliest takes I've read so far on this picture; make sure you don't allow those balloons to pop! // paul
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea!!! I knew those balloons would lift you high! // paul
Date: 1/4/2015 9:24:00 AM
Love that "ocean of time." I get the ripples and the waves going. Love, daver
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:30:00 AM
Great words and picture Andrea. I think you have captured it well.
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