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One Christmas Morn

We awoke to a bleak Christmas day. Fog had stolen the magic away. Dawn was broken and could not rise up to greet us. Still we sang out joyfully with gratitude to the heavens. Our song was heard, the fog lifted, and morning’s enchantment poured down golden. (Theme #1: Cat Steven's "Morning Has Broken") Written Dec. 20, 2014 by Andrea Dietrich For the Enchantment Through Prism Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/7/2015 9:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea. Love the way the sun comes out, lifting the fog!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/31/2014 11:30:00 AM

Happy new year, Andrea, with congrats on the win.

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/30/2014 6:54:00 PM

Congrats Andrea.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/30/2014 2:46:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win! I loved it the first time I read it! Best wishes to you and yours in the coming New Year! Hugs, Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/30/2014 2:12:00 PM

congratulations Andrea on your win ,nicely done

Paul Callus

Date: 12/30/2014 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea...a truly enchanting poem inspired by one of my fav songs. Glad to be sharing the same rung on the winners' list with you. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/30/2014 12:57:00 PM

Very nicely done adding the Christmas effect Andrea. Well thought out and executed. A+

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 12:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love this prism it attracts bland white light and refracts a miriad of unique colors in its stead. lots of love Armand.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/30/2014 11:19:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xxx

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/25/2014 9:44:00 AM

Andrea, Most Excellent!! Congratulations on Poem of the Day!! Merry Christmas, Gary

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/24/2014 7:47:00 PM

Oh my goodness, go figure, poem of the day. Congratulations on having the poem of the day Christmas Eve Day! The best poet I know. I only wish I were aloud to fav this again. I am sure many poets will fav this very special poem on this very special day. You are blessed!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 12/30/2014 11:57:00 AM

The word is not spelled 'aloud' it is spelled allowed. IPad self corrects if you get one letter wrong it throws in its own assumption. That's my story and I am sticking to it.

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 12/24/2014 5:10:00 PM

Very nice. Congrats on poem of the day.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2014 3:48:00 PM

This is enchanting Andrea - i want this song playing at my funeral lol I adore the keyboards on it by Rick Wakeman who used to have a property on our little Island. congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xxx

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/24/2014 3:19:00 PM

The sun shone brightly in each and every heart. And cleared a way for a day to be filled with no more dismay. That's the way everyday should start. Peace. :) Gotta love Cat Stevens.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/24/2014 10:41:00 AM

fabulous play of words.. a magic spell as Andrea always does and will do in years to come.Great one Andrea.Love. Wish you Merry Christmas and happy New Year 2015. Be in health, Be in peace, Be in prosperity.God bless.Hugs xxxx rajat

David Meade

Date: 12/24/2014 9:55:00 AM

I doubt that fog could steal anything from your radiance! My love's enchantment continue to rain down upon you and your whole family -- Merry Christmas dear Andrea!

Sneha Rv

Date: 12/24/2014 9:01:00 AM

Wow! Amazing! I thought writing lines with so many syllables would be more like prose than poetry - But I thought wrong!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/24/2014 8:30:00 AM

Andrea, huge congratulations on your beautiful poem being chosen Poem of the Day! Merry Christmas, Sandra.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/24/2014 7:33:00 AM

You are still getting lots of comments. I will say one thing though...there are a lot of great looking guys with platinum blond hair on PoetrySoup. Just judging by the people commenting on your poem. Just saying.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/24/2014 7:30:00 AM

Merry Christmas to you and yours! There is a change in the air for your families future. A Gray Cloud lifts and rays of jewels bright, light your future. All My Love Always, Maurice!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/24/2014 7:16:00 AM

An enchanting morn and perfect poem chosen for TPOD on Christmas eve. Congrats, Andrea! Merry Christmas to you and yours. Love and blessings, Rhonda

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/24/2014 7:05:00 AM

Oh definitely a fav! I love this poem and the song that inspired it. Here's wishing you and your family a very merry Christmas, Andrea.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/24/2014 4:05:00 AM

A beautiful piece Andrea...Merry Christmas to you and your family.... Hugs Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2014 10:31:00 PM

7 Andrea. Prayers were answered! Beautiful visual poem. Blessings and a happy Merry Christmas to you and your family

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/23/2014 6:05:00 PM

This is great, Andrea, for Theme #1. Definitely a visual of "Morning Has Broken" from a negative broken to a positive one! Love it! Good luck in the contest. Sandra