Broken People

Broken People

I wish to be with the broken people.
The get in your face challenge me people. The sometimes hidden sitting in a dark corner kinda people.
The “Don't you love me?”
I wish you seen me sorta people.
People just being real people.
Not having to have it all together people. Them doing their best to figure it out people. Dancing and singing without the smooth moves people.

I don't care about the color of their skin, or what others think of as their sin. No need to be perfect to win.
Seeing and listening is where I'll begin. Beyond appearance of fat or thin. I only know what I know
I've never been where they've been.

We'll start 
with our broken smiles
it's the best we've got.
It might seem like so little 
still I think it's a lot.
Through life's struggles we've all fought. Lessons needed learning
experienced not taught.
Real is real it couldn't be bought.

So forget the fake people,
the all about perfect hair and clothes people. The I live in the right neighborhood and drive the right car people. It's all about me, top of the hill people. They only hang out with the supremely cool people.
those too important to talk to me people. Thinking they're the best of the best kinda people, when all along they are merely Sheeple.
Ba ba baaing, thinking they are strong instead of feeble.

I love characters 
people who are unique.
I look under exteriors to gain a peek.
Strength of lions disguised in meek.
Unconcerned with fab or being chic.
Worth listening to if allowed to speak.
The stories they tell will make your eyes leak.

For in the end
we are all broken
stumbling and choking.
Disguising hurt with our joking,
victims of others and their poking.
So look close maybe you'll see
eyes that aren't blank 
hearts that aren't empty.
Who we think of as complicated
in the end might not be.
They might push when others come close,yet they are affectionate times three. Each just a bit afraid and broken. All the while wishing  
and wanting to be a part of something. If only we choose to see
those on the fringes are a part of the we. All we have to do is let them be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Jones Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 10:59 AM
This is brilliant with a very nice cadence and flow! I see why it’s on the soups list of great poems! Congratulations!
Hamilton Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Loved this inspiring write, always been an important write for me. You know this inspired my song We are all broken people, so thanks for the inspiration. Check your soupmail for a message.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Sorry I missed this until now.
Mendoza Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 7:34 PM
My dear Richard hello, would u like to be with the disabled people? I am disabled with a paralyzed left arm. Your poem is cool about people I I liked the part where you said something like the want to important people. I suggest for u to see some of my poems because the Divine Lord chose me to spread the words so I'm sharing the important things that people needs to know. Thank you in advance... Jac---> short for my real name and so that we have a Jac for girls.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Thanks, I’ll have a look.
Jewls Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 7:54 PM
I love how this poem describes real life and I feel like everyone can relate to this.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 6:11 AM
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts.
Captain  Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 1:01 AM
Nice, this poem explain how you see your surroundings. It give us chance to look at your world through your eyes.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 7:51 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Knox Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 3:14 PM
I love this poem. Yes, I enjoy being in the presence of real people too. You described just what I observe every day. You truly have talent.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Thanks o much for reading and leaving such a nice response.
Werner Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 5:36 AM
What a great piece of work. Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Thanks Jake. I appreciate you reading and taking time to leave a comment.
Empress Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 1:37 AM
I always think that the ones that laugh the loudest are the ones disguising hurt and pain behind jokes. And we are yes of-course different shades of broken. I agree and resonate with this write on a deep level. And i can see why so many can resonate too, it is the seamless flow of your words and the way you describe things that connects poetically. Enjoyed reading this. Impeccable
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Thanks so much for this beautiful comment. Blessings Richard.
Darnell Sr Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:37 PM
Great people poem, very unique. Makes me want to make new friends. Haha, strangest thing. Richard, great penning, loved the read, enjoyed myself. Best Wishes, William Darnell Sr
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thanks for the visit and lighthearted comment.
Rhymer Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Enjoyed your poem about my peeps.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Etheridge Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 11:30 PM
I like these kinds that make me want to write. “Broken smiles” seems like a sequel. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Thanks so much for reading. Blessings Richard.
Mccann Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 10:03 PM
I know it's a long time ago but I've just found your Broken People. I love it and now will have to search for your others!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 11:11 PM
What a nice thing to say. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Peranteau Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 6:17 AM
from one uv those who has dabbled at the top, unto the difficult extrication from the mire; i send accolades for not only your making this list, yet too; for the light you have shed in your write here...have a great weekend dear poet...much love, james
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Thanks so much for reading.
Venkataraman Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:49 AM
This apparently appears to be a free verse, but a poem with maximum possible fine rhyme and rhythm. I personally feel people are people and we can never change their basic character. Poor people may be peevish and rich people may be sociable. What is embedded in the gene, even God can't alter. A very nice poem indeed!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 7:10 AM
I enjoyed this comment. Thanks for reading.
Ray Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 1:06 PM
This journey is closer for all of us than we think... spot on...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Thanks for reading.
Amadore Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 4:39 PM
Very good indeed. And quite appealing to people (like me!) Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Thanks Leo.
Godwin Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 4:46 PM
You delivered a deep and personal poem that drew me in as I read it. Hey, I just noticed your write has 8 pages of comments. That sorta lessens my input - or does it? I doubt that any writer feels that they can receive too much positive input. Good to read you again ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Always nice to have a visit from you Cay Cay. Sorry I haven’t been here much. Busy with my site on Facebook. The Inspired Poetry Project. You would fit in nicely. Please check it out.
Ladd Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 2:49 PM
How I love this - love for all - living in the now - thanks for sharing it!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:28 AM
My pleasure Betty.
Hyde Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:25 PM
I love the sentiment here and the 'perfect imperfectness' described. I feel like you were in my head!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Thanks for reading.
Lamula Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:22 AM
"It might seem like so little".....Still i think it's a lot I love this part..... i'm inspired and encouraged at the same time. nice..
Lamoureux Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 2:14 AM
This is incredibly insightful. I fav it and enjoy it being on the best poems list. Congrats
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 6:18 AM
You honour me. I’m so pleased it resonates for you. Blessings Rick.
Kingston Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:17 PM
So many people seem to have such perfect happy lives and that's wonderful. But the saying, Don't judge a book by its cover, goes far. You may never know the sadness behind the smile. Your poem was deep, raw, and moving. It made me pause and think. It's one I will read again over time. Be as kind as you can to everyone. I am glad to have found this write.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 10:58 PM
Your comment made my evening. Thanks so much for adding your thoughts. Blessings Richard. ;0)
Peckham Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I love this poem. I love the way it is written, with the first and fourth stanzas unrhymed and the excellent rhymes in the others, The repetition of the term "broken people" gives the poem a punch and is very effective. You are a very fine poet, and I am impressed.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Hi Barbara, your comment has made my day. Thanks so much for your visit.
Hankins Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:56 PM
This is a very special poem, Richard, worthy of as much dissemination as is possible. It really should be POTD or POTW. You are a very gifted poet, my friend. Definitely a FAVE for me.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Thanks so much Milton. This is a personal favourite of mine. Thanks for reading and for such a great comment.
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 8:40 PM
An absolute superb piece of work. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Thanks so much Curtis.
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