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In dizzying rounds rain goes up and down; see the heat of the day steamroll the lawn. Mist ascends; then back again, dew rebounds; to bathe the leaves, kiss the breeze, rain fawns. A lawn moss green down by the stream at dawn is frosted with a sprite haze of frail fog. Born of goosebump nights are damp morns, where water falls translucent in the bog. With a sizzling sound the rain dropped adorns the lilies in the bog on rheumy morns. On mountains high the rain falls white disguised as snow; sun turns snow to ice, down it goes. In dizzy rounds rain pounds, the sun complies and all this a high power has composed. Water disguised is a gift that God's composed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2015 11:38:00 AM
Awesome imagery here, I am not a lover of rain but I do know the importance of it. This is a beauty ;) hope your day will be a great one xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:04:00 PM
Hey Debbie, your poem is a lovely picture of the rain. This is so well written that I can hear music as I read it. Thanks for sharing this. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful images of rain. A fav for me! I love the rain whatever form it takes.
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:54:00 AM
What a lovely scene, what a lovely sight, water has always been, what made earth evergreen...A 7 and a fav! Kim ;)
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Date: 1/31/2015 2:41:00 PM
You have captured this scene with your poesy dear poet ! Thanx for the read today Debbie, I enjoyed ! Have a blessed weekend.....much love, james
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:47:00 PM
:) The water cycle so beautifully penned by our dear Debbie G!!! :) I love rheumy morns....I loved goosebump nights...though I don't love bogs! ;) Debbie...check your inbox, dear. HUGS TO YOU!
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Date: 1/30/2015 4:18:00 PM
Your imagery is sublime Debbie - this is simply stunning - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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