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The Jeweler's Lathe

THE JEWELER’S LATHE Summer’s last rose After many admiring morning visits And with nature’s rusty brown and gold Surrounding, drawing comparison, Becomes even more pink and beautiful Being aware as being – native to all souls – Nature strives to improve, The old become new New, alike the jeweler’s lathe Polishing polishing Refining awareness - The familiar like a great Schubert string quartet Suddenly with new revealing. Leonard Bernstein says about music, to the effect, ”An old friend becomes more dear” Refining one’s awareness There can be no drudgery, But there must be effort, Must be the look-through, A soul’s effort to find. Therein lies the beauty, The finding. When the diamond Set to the jeweler’s lathe Catches sun Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/10/2015 10:53:00 PM
An importance of love and understanding has shone through with gentle appreciation for life's delicate balance in this piece Dave. Shine on.
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Date: 6/20/2015 9:42:00 AM
This is so beautiful Daver. It is one of your best. 7
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Date: 6/6/2015 8:12:00 PM
Ahh..' inspiration Daver let me breath of it..'
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:02:00 AM
A 7 and a fave for me! Stunning! Sometimes we have to work to find the beauty but when we do, it is breathtaking and glorious.
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Date: 5/30/2015 10:57:00 PM
ohh my, beguiled by the charm of this stunning piece, daver!.. you know what real beauty is !.. huggs
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:55:00 PM
wow, Daver. one of your best of your recent posts. I really enjoyed this one and its fine imagery!
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:35:00 PM
I like this very much Daver, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:46:00 PM
Hi Dave. This is a powerful poem of renewal and appreciation. A true delight to read (more than once). The final lines reach a sparkling climax. #7 // paul
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:04:00 PM
Dave, this is a stunning write, vivid and deep, an impressive 7 from me and thanks for visiting my Haiku 8, I recall in childhood being chased by crows, they can be very protective of their nests and quite dangerous
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