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Hi!

My name is Ariana Pataki, and I'm 15 years old. I'm from Spain, from a beautiful city called Zaragoza. English is not my first language. I apologize for any mistakes my grammar may have. My parents are from Hungary and Romania, so I speak five languages: Spanish, English, French, Hungarian and Romanian. I'm currently learning Italian and Portuguese. 

I love languages, since I want to work as a translator, travelling round the world and helping people understand each other.

I define myself as someone very positive, kind and sociable. I always think about others, and I try to help them out. I love being with my friends, reading novels, writing my own novels, obviously poetry and learning new stuff. 

Usually, people say I'm too young to write poetry. I have been told this for years.

I started writing my own short stories at the age of ten. Those small histories were not a big deal, but led me to start to write novels at the age of 12. I started my first book in 2021, and I finished it in 2023. Right now, my goal is finishing my third thriller novel, which I called "Pulse of panic". Finally, I recently finished another short novel, which is called "Wild Heart"

My parents are not big supporters of my work. They believe my novels and poems are just a way of wasting my time.I've been struggling with many stuff and writing has always helped me out. I want to have an optimistic view, and say that everything will get better.

In 2023, at school, I began to write small verses on my notebooks, words that could rhyme and could express how I felt. Slowly, everything made sense, and I made my very first poem: Overthink. After that one, everything flowed good. I began to write more and more, when I felt happy or stressed. Poetry is my way of scaping reality.

I found Poetry Soup, and started posting my poems. Lots of wonderful people started reading my poems, commenting on them and saying such beautiful things, I had to keep going! They all inspired me, and encouraged me. I'lll cherish each of them in my heart. You all are the best!! I never thought my words could be appreciated the way they do. I'm really grateful.

I'm just a teenage girl, with so many dreams and hopes. I'll keep trying my best, trying to make good poems. I'll keep learning day by day. 

Thanks for reading such a long biography. Honestly, thanks for everyone who reads my poems and spend some of their time reading this biography. I'm so happy to be a part of Poetry Soup's community.

Have a great day, and take care. Be safe!

Ariana :-)


Verses of the heart.

Blog Posted:11/16/2023 10:41:00 AM

I did not really know what to write about, but I have finally found something I realized earlier while checking some of my first poems.

I wanted to spill a little bit about something that's been on my mind lately: the wild ride of emotions and how it impacts the poetry I write.

Have you ever noticed how some days the words flow like sunshine, bright and warm? Other times, it's like I'm diving into the depths of the darkest ocean, discovering words I never thought I had in me. It's like my mood is the paintbrush, and poetry is the canvas.

On those days when everything feels right in the world, my poetry becomes a celebration of joy and laughter. The words dance on the page like confetti, and each line is a snapshot of the sunshine beaming inside me. It's as if I've captured the feeling of running through a field of wildflowers or tasting the sweetness of ice cream on a hot summer day.

But let's be real - not every day is a walk in the park. Some days, it's more like a walk through a haunted forest. Those are the times when my poetry takes a darker turn. It's not that I want to be all gloom and doom, but there's something strangely therapeutic about expressing the shadows inside me. It's like turning the storm clouds in my mind into words on a page, a way of acknowledging the tough stuff.

What surprises me the most is the discovery of emotions I didn't even know were there. It's like opening a door to a room I've never entered before. I find strength in vulnerability and beauty in pain. It's like I'm unraveling the layers of myself, peeling back the surface to reveal the complexities underneath.

Being 14 is like riding an emotional rollercoaster. One day, I'm on cloud nine, and the next, I'm navigating the twists and turns of uncertainty. And you know what? That's okay. Because each mood, whether it's sunshine or stormy, contributes to the masterpiece that is my life.

But it's fine. It's completely fine. No matter what, my poems are meaninful, and are written with heart. That's something I find really interesting. I don't write using my mind. I use my heart. And I don't want to stop any time soon.

Grateful for anyone who has dedicated some time to read my poems, and this attempt of blog. I'll improve, I promise.

Have a nice day, and enjoy!

Ariana.

 



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Date: 11/18/2023 5:15:00 AM
Hi Ariana: I am so glad you are using the medium of poetry to express your ups and downs. The world needs stories. I Quote, “Ode BY ARTHUR O'SHAUGHNESSY We are the music makers, And we are the dreamers of dreams, Wandering by lone sea-breakers, And sitting by desolate streams; — World-losers and world-forsakers, On whom the pale moon gleams: Yet we are the movers and shakers Of the world for ever, it seems. Best, Suzanne
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Date: 11/18/2023 6:48:00 AM
I use poems to express my feelings and thoughts, both the good ones and the bad ones. That's a really inspiring quote Suz!
Date: 11/17/2023 10:57:00 AM
Ariana, I write with my heart also, welcome to PS
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/18/2023 3:30:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 11/17/2023 6:03:00 AM
I write mostly fiction and not too much about me, my life, my feelings. Feels safer that way. Plus I enjoy creating something from nothing. New characters, new and sometimes out of the norm stories. I don't follow trends or allow my muse to be led by others. I'm just me.
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Date: 11/17/2023 8:02:00 AM
Hi Tom. Muse comes from different places. You are just you, and your muse comes from creating new amazing small worlds. Mine comes from my own life and experiences. Nice to read your comment.
Date: 11/17/2023 4:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing these, Ariana... God bless you.
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:06:00 PM
WOW! You are very mature for your age, Ariana. To speak five languages is impressive by itself. You are already a talented writer, based solely on this blog post. You are open and your writing is succinct and vibrant. I look forward to reading some of your poetry soon and will check for your blog post. I've been here at Poetry Soup just over two years now. My wife is also a writer and poet. I post under the name Bill Baker, and she post under the name Sara Etgen-Baker. We'll be checking your poetry for new post and would appreciate you checking ours too so we can get to know each others poetry. Have a great week! Bill & Sara Baker
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:44:00 PM
This comment is too nice. Hi Bill and Sara. Your poems are so good, I've read a few, and I'm amazed that such good writer like you could be reading my poems. It's nice to meet you both, and I'm happy that you could enjoy a little reading my poems
Date: 11/16/2023 9:52:00 PM
Again, I enjoyed reading a little more about you. Welcome. Like Arlo said, " to be 14 again or even 50 would be nice.
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:41:00 PM
Thanks for reading my blogs Eve! I'm new to writing these, but I'm trying my best!
Date: 11/16/2023 8:56:00 PM
You write so well Ariana, like you poets write from the heart, from good times or bad, happy or sad…. Belle
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:41:00 PM
That's the important thing, to write from the heart!
Date: 11/16/2023 4:29:00 PM
Aloha, Ariana. I'm in Hawaii, USA and I welcome you as a fellow Souper, as we are known here at PoetrySoup. Blessings, William
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:40:00 PM
Hi! Wow, you're from Hawaii! I may say I've checked some of your poems, they are really good. Thanks for reading my blog!
Date: 11/16/2023 4:13:00 PM
Oh, to be 14 again and having conversations about life with a true poet. Bless your heart, Ariana. :-)
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:38:00 PM
I would love to have people my age to talk about poems, but instead I have people like you, in poetry soup. I'm so glad I found out about this page and I am so grateful for being a part of this community. Thanks!

My Past Blog Posts

 
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11/18/2023 why do we lie? Rhymeconflict,
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11/3/2023 Life's Canvas Free versebeautiful,life,
11/2/2023 Last Organ Grinder Rhymedeath,music,simple,
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10/30/2023 Hope In Kindness Free verseappreciation,beautiful,co
10/29/2023 Reflections Free verseanxiety,appreciation,feel
10/29/2023 Unseen Rhymeappreciation,beautiful,en
10/21/2023 Sunshine Rhymeappreciation,beautiful,ha
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10/19/2023 Change Rhymeappreciation,beautiful,po
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10/3/2023 Harmony of Hearts Free verseart,beautiful,love,
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