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In a world where I give my best each day, I try so hard in every single way. I share my all with a hopeful heart, But it seems my efforts fall apart. No one seems to notice, I'm out of sight, In this struggle, I hide my plight. I do my best to make them see, But I'm like a whisper in a roaring sea. I feel like a shadow, quiet and small, No one sees me, no one hears my call. But I'll keep on trying, doing my part, Hoping one day, I'll touch a heart. Even if I'm just a face in the crowd, I'll keep giving, saying clear and loud, "I'm here, I care," though I'm ignored, I'll keep on loving, with strength restored.

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Date: 10/29/2023 8:43:00 AM
Positive vibes to this one Ariana. Continued success with writing, you are doing a great job!!
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/29/2023 8:46:00 AM
Hi Mark! I'm still trying my best to make better poems, thanks for your words, I'm thankful for your comments!
Date: 10/29/2023 7:46:00 AM
Love it, you are a beacon for God in shining His light and love unto a world of darkness and hate, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: )
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/29/2023 8:46:00 AM
You are really sweet, thanks for your kind words! I appreciate your comment.
Date: 10/29/2023 6:29:00 AM
It is not easy when we feel invisible, but many can feel like this.. it is never nice when one does not feel appreciated... your rhyme your poems really well and the flow is also very good... I hope you can find people who actually see you...
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