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Finding My Way

Am I okay, or am I not? Will anyone see the good I've got? Life can be tough, people can be mean, But I'll find my way, and be seen. Labels and judgments, they're not fair, But I'll keep going, I'll learn to care. Even if I feel like I'm in the rough, I'll prove I'm good, and that's enough.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 10/17/2023 7:18:00 AM

Ariana, 14 years old. WOW! You have a voice that will appeal to many, so keep on writing. Soup Mail is where you can write to us privately, like on email. If I can help please contact me. Folks on Poetry soup are kind and will support you.

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/17/2023 7:51:00 AM

Thank you a lot Barbara. I'm trying my very best, as I'm still new at poetry. I didn't know I could send emails on here, so really thank you! I'll happily contact you if I have any doubts. Thanks for your support.

Mark Hughes

Date: 10/2/2023 10:16:00 AM

Exactly! That is the way forward.