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Reflections

In the mirror's glare, I often see, A face and body that can't define me. I'm just a girl, lost in the fray, With struggles that won't seem to go away. My guilt's a weight, it won't release, I hide in shadows, seeking some peace. I battle the mirror, the scale, my plate, In the quest to be thin, to change my fate. The world's a blur through my weary eyes, I wear a mask, a clever disguise. Inside, I'm broken, my spirit's scarred, Trapped in a cycle that's endlessly hard. Yet hope feels distant, a far-off star, I wonder who am I, and who you are. In hidden corners, my tears do flow, A silent scream, a desperate echo. But there's a depth in the pain I bear, A hidden strength, a story to share. I'm more than the surface, the hurt I wear, A survivor of battles, a soul laid bare. In this journey that seems so long, I'll keep on fighting, though the pain is strong. But the mirror's still harsh, the struggle is real, And there's no happy ending to how I feel.

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Date: 11/16/2023 4:18:00 PM
Today is a gift; that’s why it’s called the present. Enjoy each “present” you get, Ariana, they’re precious and full of real life. The joy is in the discovery and perseverance. :-)
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/16/2023 10:34:00 PM
Hi Arlo! I'm trying my best to express my feelings in my poems. I want to enjoy each moment, you're absolutely right about it. Have a great weekend!
Date: 10/29/2023 1:01:00 PM
True beauty comes from within, Ariana, perhaps you should just get rid of your mirror and be yourself. You are a beautiful writer and I’m sure you have a beautiful heart as well. Let your beauty shine. John
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Date: 10/29/2023 8:35:00 AM
Ariana, a deep dive into some insecurities. Seems to be a prevailing theme of yours. You should find solace in the positive aspects of who you are. You display a definite talent for writing! There is truth to the fact, we are our own toughest critic. I will refer you to a poem of mine, Introspection.
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Mark Hughes
Date: 10/29/2023 9:08:00 AM
I refer you to (read my poem) Introspection.
Date: 10/29/2023 5:33:00 AM
Guilt can make anyone feel this way.. You describe the feeling so emotively and poetically .. another well written poem Ariana..
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