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This morning, I woke up with a bunch of ideas buzzing in my head. I started writing something, and honestly, I'm not exactly sure what it is. It kind of turned into this little intro about myself. You know, how I see things and stuff. Just felt like jotting it down, and here it is.

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I'm Ariana, just turned fifteen, In Spain's sunny warmth, where dreams convene. From the get-go, I've been hooked on books, Lost in tales, nooks and crannies it took. Wandering through pages, losing track of time, My escape from reality, in each written line. Love for poetry runs deep in my veins, Words are my shield, in life's unpredictable lanes. I'm not just a reader, but a writer too, Crafting novels, dreams I pursue. Got a book I'm working on, won't let it drop, Determined, writing won't let me stop. Music's my haven, words my escape, In the rhythm of life, my dreams take shape. Fifteen years old, but dreaming so vast, Adventures ahead, future's forecast. Dreaming of places, faces so kind, Hoping my work, in the world, they'll find. I wish for a life full of joy and fun, Doing what I love, till the day is done. So here's to the future, to dreams so bright, In this journey of life, I'll take flight. I hope for adventures, new friends, and more, Living the dreams I've got in store.

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Date: 1/27/2024 12:55:00 PM
What genre of books do you enjoy to write?
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 1/27/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thriller, Crime, and Romance!
Date: 1/18/2024 10:17:00 AM
Ariana, your poem radiates sun-kissed dreams at 15! From book-fueled journeys to pen-crafted worlds, your voice rings with passion. Keep writing words, chasing adventures, and letting your dreams take flight. The world awaits your vibrant stories. Happy belated birthday, and may your future sparkle! -Blessings, Daniel
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 1/20/2024 12:34:00 AM
Hi Daniel! Thank you very much for your comment, it's really sweet. Also thanks for reading my poem, it means a lot. Have a lovely day!
Date: 1/15/2024 4:10:00 AM
I enjoyed your “look in the mirror” Ariana, full of hope for an exciting future. Write on my young friend! John
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 1/15/2024 6:06:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem John. I'm trying to keep on writing poems. Have a lovely day.
Date: 1/13/2024 10:06:00 AM
Nice poem from a determined young writer/poet. I only see bright future for you, my young lady,
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 1/13/2024 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Jay, I really appreciate your comment. :-)

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