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Last Organ Grinder

In a quiet street, his music would play, The last organ grinder, day after day. Under the moon's soft and silvery gleam, He lived his life like a fading dream. No crowd gathered 'round, no applause or cheer, Just the sound of his organ, crystal clear. With weathered hands and a knowing gaze, He played for himself in those dim-lit days. No family, no friends, just his trusty machine, He lived and he played in a world unseen. As the stars above blinked out one by one, The Last Organ Grinder's song was done. Alone in the silence, he quietly passed, No one to mourn him, no words that would last. In the empty streets where memories wane, The last organ grinder found his final lane. His story untold, a life obscure, In the heart of the city, he'd endure. His music still lingers in the city's hum, The last organ grinder, in the city's memory, drums.

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Date: 11/24/2023 7:17:00 AM
I can feel the lonely sadness in your write Ariana. It was a pleasure to read.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/24/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for commenting!
Date: 11/23/2023 3:47:00 AM
wow I can feel the echo of his beautiful craft , congrats on your top win dear poet
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/23/2023 5:45:00 AM
Thanks for commenting and reading my poem!
Date: 11/22/2023 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful write, Ariana, enjoyed reading your work. Congratulations on your win in Silent's contest.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/23/2023 5:44:00 AM
Thanks Eve! I'm grateful!
Date: 11/22/2023 7:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/22/2023 11:29:00 AM
Great storytelling Ariana, you wrote wonderful poems that flows and rhymes very well.. Could feel the sadness of the last organ grinder passing all alone.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/22/2023 10:33:00 PM
Oh, I did not expect to be in first place! Thank you! Thanks for reading my poem Silent one. I really appreciate your comments. Have a great day.
Date: 11/16/2023 7:59:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Ariana, an enthralling read… Belle
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/16/2023 10:35:00 PM
Thank you very much Belle!
Date: 11/7/2023 6:32:00 AM
A poignant story indeed, Ariana. Your meter flows so smoothly. I enjoy reading your poetry. John
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/7/2023 7:32:00 AM
Thanks John, I tried my best. I'm so happy you liked my poem!

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