growing up

Sometimes I wonder, what is it like to be an adult?
To live alone, to work, to reach 18?
To get your driver's license, to cook in your own apartment.
To earn money or to spend from your savings.
The world of adults seems so different from mine as a teenager,
Will I hit a wall head-on when I reach it?
What is it like to be an adult?
They make me choose now what to study, then go to university.
But who helps me choose what kind of person I want to be,
How to reach maturity or how to be a good adult?
Are adults just children in adult bodies?
Do you change forever? 

In the labyrinth of adulthood, we wander,
Navigating the twists and turns of responsibility,
Each decision a brick in the path we tread,
A path that stretches out before us, unknown.

We long for the freedom adulthood promises,
To stand on our own, to carve our own destiny,
Yet with freedom comes the weight of choice,
And the fear of stumbling in the dark.

Do we ever truly grow up,
Or are we forever children, just wearing older faces?
In the mirror, we search for answers,
But all we find are more questions.

What does it mean to be an adult?
To shoulder the burdens of the world,
To chase dreams or simply survive,
To find our place in this vast, chaotic universe.

Perhaps adulthood is not a destination,
But a journey, ever-evolving,
A dance between who we are and who we strive to be,
A constant metamorphosis of the soul.

So let us embrace the uncertainty,
And step boldly into the unknown,
For in the depths of our questions,
Lies the beauty of our humanity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/11/2024 5:54:00 PM
Dear Ariana, your contemplation on the journey of growing up shows the uncertainty and curiosity we all experience as we navigate the transition into adulthood. I loved how your poetic words reflect the complexity of this period, where freedom and responsibility intersect, and where the search for identity and purpose is both daunting and exhilarating. Yes, adulthood is not a destination but a continuous journey of self-discovery and growth. I like embracing the challenges and cherish the moments of wonder along the way, for they shape the person you are becoming. Beautiful Read! - Blessings, Daniel
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 AM
I am very glad that you enjoyed my poem Daniel. lovely comment, thank you so much! means a lot to me!
Date: 4/11/2024 11:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "growing up" story/write. Most kids want to be adults. Most adults would love to go back being a kid. I always want to be 21. At 21, I stayed there for many years. 21 birthday after birthday. Have a fun day writing away.................
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 4/14/2024 3:03:00 AM
Hi Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem! Well afterall, isn't age just a number? Seems like all depends on your mindset. Have a great day!
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