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And finally my spark is back. I'm really happy to be back on poetry. Honestly I'm happy to be back to myself. I had this kind of break down a couple of weeks ago. Eveything seemed so heavy. I just hope it's gone for good, and I can keep on enjoying life. I don't want to feel like that ever again because I felt worthless. But it's okay! Because now I'm feeling okay!

But I apologize for just leaving PS like this. Sorry.

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In the shadows of sadness, a frozen spell, My heart like ice, in a cold, dark well. A bitter wind whispers tales of woe, Freezing my spirit, a chilling blow. Beneath the weight of an emotional freeze, I'm lost in the winter of memories. But in the quiet of the frosty air, A spark of hope begins to declare. Slowly, like sunlight on a winter's day, A warmth creeps in, chasing the cold away. The bones that once shivered start to feel, A gentle thaw, a sensation so real. The wind, once harsh, becomes a gentle breeze, Softly singing a song that puts me at ease. A gradual melt of the icy strife, Brings back the colors to my black-and-white life. From the frozen spell, I rise, new and bright, Like sunshine breaking through the darkest night. The cold's just a memory, a tale retold, With warmth inside, I'm brave and bold. But life, it twists, turns, a constant ride, Chill returns, shadows by my side. Yet, armed with warmth, deep within, I face the cold, let a new chapter begin.

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Date: 12/30/2023 9:55:00 AM
May the sun always warm your spirit my friend!
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 12/31/2023 1:51:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem John!
Date: 12/30/2023 9:36:00 AM
Beautiful encouraging poem, we all have this battle my friend, glad you are doing well your poem is a shining light unto the hearts, souls and minds : )
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 12/30/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem Stephan!

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