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I don't want to lose him. I want him to choose me. But he doesn't choose me, he either lets me go. Aren't I enough dad? Gosh.
In shadows cast by memories untold, A daughter's heart, a tale unfolds. Daddy's girl in the quiet ache, Longing for love her heart can't shake. Whispers of love, a distant hum, In the echoes, where love did come. Yet, in her core, a yearning plea, A daughter's wish, "Dad, cherish me." Through corridors of silent cries, Where wounded hopes in secrecy lies. She craves a warmth, a father's touch, A bond that time can't erase or clutch. In twilight hours, she softly weaves, A tapestry of dreams, heart conceives. A dance of words unsaid, unheard, A silent plea within each word. Oh, father dear, with arms so wide, Wrap her in love, cast pain aside. Let your gaze be a soothing balm, In your embrace, let her find calm. For in the verses of her soul, A daughter's song, a story untold. Yearning for love, like petals fall, To hear a father's tender call. Through the heavy mist of unspoken fears, Echoes a plea that time endears. "Daddy, hold me, let love revive, In your gaze, let me feel alive." In the symphony of life's refrain, A daughter's heart, a silent pain. Yet, within the shadows that time conceals, Hope blooms, and a wounded heart heals.

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Date: 3/25/2024 1:02:00 AM
A wonderfully rhymed poem speaking of a daughter's yearning for her father's love. I enjoyed it.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 4/10/2024 8:25:00 AM
thanks Lanier, it is a very special piece for me since it reflects one of my biggest concerns nowadays.. have an amazing day!
Date: 2/28/2024 6:19:00 AM
Dear Ariana, This is a heartbreaking poem. You beautifully capture the daughter's unspoken pain and longing for her father's love. The imagery of "shadows," "echoes," and "silent cries" is powerful, conveying her emotional vulnerability. Your ending offers hope, with the daughter yearning for a father's comforting embrace and love. This piece is truly touching and evokes empathy for the daughter's journey. - Blessings, Daniel
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 4/10/2024 8:24:00 AM
(Hi Daniel. Thank you for your comment, your words are very kind and I'm so glad you felt everything I wanted to express. Have a lovely day. :) (Btw, Sorry for the late answer)

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