Revel Poems | Examples


To Revel in Life

Can you, O Lord,
dim the sun a bit
and brighten
the moon some?

Can you mix wine
in the seas a bit
and add to the wind
fragrance some?

Can you color
the clouds a bit
and add music 
to the rainfall some?

Can you sling a swing
over the rainbow a bit
and toss confetti
with the snowfall some?

Then, I shall celebrate
my life a bit, 
and greet death
with smiles some.

Premium Member Revel In A Luscious Glimpse

Deep blood red orange cloud’s,
ethereal dream float,
Satin wind carrier of luscious mint,
green hymnody’s deft transport,
Spring hues random loitering,
between gray peeled branches,
Chirpy echo squeak,
 from red-wing blackbird,
A fragile wafer tin threshold,
Golden stream gurgle,
under marsh reeds, 
Evanescent saline grain haze,
Azure ocean tide aroused,
from still wave slumber,
Clamshell pearl strewn oyster,
 oddments interspersed,
on pockmark sandstone beach, 
Iridescent canopy of nature trail,
Awaits the first blush pilgrim,
who revels in lavish glimpses,
And sumptuous earworm madrigal,
A tantalizing world so close,
Glad tiding raptures,
from the camper awakened,
Coffee caper bean whiff aromatic,
Quencher of dust road harsh throat,
Splatter free rapeseed oil,
daub on an iron pan,
wild howl from prehistoric wolf, 
So quaint in its primal sweep,
hair-raising backdrop to stir fry meal,
Tinplate dollop sated hunger
Form: Narrative


Premium Member What Gentlemen Revel In

Another shot he didn't need
      adrenaline his veins would bleed

   What gentleman would not revel in
      a date who looks like Marilyn
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Rain

RAIN
                                             Monsoon
                                        Getting drenched 

                                 Clasped hands, beating heart
                                     Dripping hair, revel in
                                Gusty wind swaying tall trees

                               "Drizzle feels doting caresses"


                                           April 10, 2023
                                    "Clarity Pyramid" Form
                               syllables checked by HMS.com
                            Pyramids 3 - 7 lines Poetry Contest
                                            Theme: Rain
                                       Sponsor: Joseph May
Form: Verse

When Flowers Revel

rejoice, the flowers
with the bliss of free light winds
      spring natural morn
Form: Haiku


Premium Member Bells Revel, Bells Toll

The chimes reveling above,
  flush with high-spirits, considering

The dolorous toll of the bells
  below, met with knowing glances

Premium Member Revel In Winter

opening your heartstrings
seeing your happiest self
mastering the cold
enthusiastically enjoying day's snowflakes
loving life and your place in it
feeling God's joy for the day
Intuitively wise, yet open
Unifying your soul-self with your flesh-self
You become blissfully joyful,
daring to revel in winter's eye
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Revel In Silence

Don’t
think
that just
because yours
was the final word
you are right.  Many times people
quit arguing hoping it will make you stop talking.
So you and they can revel in the sweet sound of silence but for different reasons.


January 9, 2019
Form: Fibonacci

Let Me Revel 'Til Tomorrow

Far from the language of men I buried
My sorrow, I wrapped it in solitude
Grieving safe in linen white and I heed
Its soft demanding voice rarely subdued

For should I say too soon: ‘I badly wish
From you to be parted. Go! Disappear
In the air, I no longer care! Vanish!
Vanish miserable friend! Vanish from here!’

Then what? For my sorrow you see
Is such a loyal tender companion
A welcome gateway and escape to me

It never lied, never cheated, what’s more
Its friendly chains I made, so do not be
too harsh, let me revel 'til tomorrow.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Revel In the Moment

Revel in the moment of now;
this moment won't ever repeat.
Live your life on the edge of wow;
don't let yourself feel incomplete.

This moment won't ever repeat;
cherish every fleeting second.
Don't let yourself feel incomplete;
in a way you had not reckoned.

Cherish every fleeting second;
get the most out of every day.
In a way you had not reckoned;
time is swiftly slipping away.

Get the most out of every day;
live your life on the edge of wow.
Time is swiftly slipping away;
revel in the moment of now.
Form: Pantoum

Revel In My Ruins

virgin feet,
i stepped onto the quicksand
in ignorance of it’s
deceit.
as the clouds
overhead draw
together in the
grayest anger,
my heart hurts for relief.
i stand tall, but
that doesn’t change the
reality of this
disaster.
you were a tornado that
spun me for a loop;
so much destruction
in such a short time.
i can’t admit my defeat so
i’ll suffer in silence and
watch you walk away.
no matter if there’s nothing
left for me to rebuild
myself:
this is the end.

Sly Revel of My Lady

Hear O maiden, on whom desire springs forth
It brews mine soul, chiming taste after port
Have thou detour, pursuit never will cease
Inside dungeon, dwells memoirs begging peace.

Not once does sole eddy whispers’ depart
Birds dance at lightning’s amazing glory,
Nervy morose obeyed deadly loch art
Baffle tongue shields the shame of thath fury.

Autumn for willow vale, bright morning frost
Exalts unto thy blossom: chilled breeze toss.
Adieu for day, thwack wilt kindle cost,
Extreme snide flits; Dank! Flout insolent loss.

Once again, thorn manifest lover’s hope
Outre’ wish from her behest painful pop.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Wallower's Revel

Oh, how sad, oh how very glum,
Goodness gracious me prater comes.
Still writing winsome words of woe,
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Oh Lord, let not our life pass by
Let us do more than weep and cry.
Wallowing in morbid abode.
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Whiling away the endless hours;
Scribbling sigils, claws cower.
Envy those not caught in limbo
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Envy the prattle on the page.
At least the words are given stage.
Fields upon fields, rows upon row.
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Feeling your life’s left no dower.
Enjoying the pain not power.
Pondering heaven on life’s gallows.
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Goodness gracious me, prater comes,
And, all of it just, so, ho-hum.
Each word stroked, petted, tilled and hoed,
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

And, all of it just, so, ho-hum.
Leave the box, flee the asylum!
Writing, writing, writing on,
Endlessly stopped, never to go.

All this soulless, mindless, drivel.
Writing, writing, scratch and scribble;
Live above your massive ego
Endlessly stopped, never to go.
Form: Kyrielle

Premium Member Revel In the Rain

Storms can come at any time
There are mountains that we climb
Sunshine helps to ease the pain
We have to revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Within the swirling squall
When your back’s against the wall
And you’re feeling so very small
Revel in the rain

Life can take us for a ride
It’s like swimming against the tide
When we lose more than we gain
It’s time to revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Looking to the sky
Spread your wings and start to fly
Let the freedom make you sigh
Revel in the rain

When you give all that you’ve got
You’ll find you’re better than you thought
You wouldn’t have grown without the pain
Raise your arms and revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Shout to the heavens, I’m alive
Feelings of triumph I revive
When all is done I will survive
Revel in the rain
Form: Ballad

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