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Revel In My Ruins

virgin feet, i stepped onto the quicksand in ignorance of it’s deceit. as the clouds overhead draw together in the grayest anger, my heart hurts for relief. i stand tall, but that doesn’t change the reality of this disaster. you were a tornado that spun me for a loop; so much destruction in such a short time. i can’t admit my defeat so i’ll suffer in silence and watch you walk away. no matter if there’s nothing left for me to rebuild myself: this is the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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