Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Verse

Rain

RAIN
                                             Monsoon
                                        Getting drenched 

                                 Clasped hands, beating heart
                                     Dripping hair, revel in
                                Gusty wind swaying tall trees

                               "Drizzle feels doting caresses"


                                           April 10, 2023
                                    "Clarity Pyramid" Form
                               syllables checked by HMS.com
                            Pyramids 3 - 7 lines Poetry Contest
                                            Theme: Rain
                                       Sponsor: Joseph May

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Susan Lawrence April 11, 2023 at 8:08 AM Mala, Your descriptions give life and power and yet a soothing quality to the monsoon rains ! I love the last line and the dripping hair within gusty winds . Best of luck in the contest ! Hugs always, Susan :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 13, 2023 at 4:05 PM Dear Susan, Thank you so much for dropping by. Your visit and your comments inspire me. I am delighted to know that you liked the last line - I really needed some assurance. This kind of poetry is not easy for me - I feel very comfortable to float in free verse! Hugs ~ Mala