Rain

RAIN Monsoon Getting drenched Clasped hands, beating heart Dripping hair, revel in Gusty wind swaying tall trees "Drizzle feels doting caresses" April 10, 2023 "Clarity Pyramid" Form syllables checked by HMS.com Pyramids 3 - 7 lines Poetry Contest Theme: Rain Sponsor: Joseph May

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/11/2023 8:08:00 AM

Mala, Your descriptions give life and power and yet a soothing quality to the monsoon rains ! I love the last line and the dripping hair within gusty winds . Best of luck in the contest ! Hugs always, Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/13/2023 4:05:00 PM

Dear Susan, Thank you so much for dropping by. Your visit and your comments inspire me. I am delighted to know that you liked the last line - I really needed some assurance. This kind of poetry is not easy for me - I feel very comfortable to float in free verse! Hugs ~ Mala