Revel In Silence

Don’t think that just because yours was the final word you are right. Many times people quit arguing hoping it will make you stop talking. So you and they can revel in the sweet sound of silence but for different reasons. January 9, 2019
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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Also I see you won a contest with it. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Great message. I loved how you put this. It's a bit of an oldie that i had missed out on!
Awtry Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Just stopping back to congratulate you on your well-earned win, PS. Of all the entries I read, yours held the most meaning for me. Way to go!
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Thank you Carolyn. I am glad to hear that :)
La France Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 10:38 AM
PS, congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous Fibonacci ~
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:24 AM
- Congratulations P.S., on your great win in the contest - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your visit. :)
Barden Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Amen! Such wisdom and truth - love it! Congratulations on your wonderful win in the Fibonacci contest, PS - blessings to you and yours, and keep writing, my friend! :-) <3
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 8:31 PM
O good! Thank you for the visit and encouragement :)
Rushing Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest!
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Wren :)
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Hi P.S. I agree. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Thank you, Alexis :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Back with well deserved congrats... Keep being courageous, it's working for you, PS.
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Line :). XXX
Proxenos Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:34 AM
I love this P.S - totally correct and what nicer way to say it than in poetic style. Very well done, great write. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Thank you. It’s probably a proverb somewhere :)
Rushing Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:02 AM
I try to frame my argument with questions when I am in a disagreement. Hoping the person's last words are the ones I've planted. Great poem, P.S. Good luck in the contest!
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 8:25 AM
I shall never approach conversation with naïveté again. You have shaken me with that revelation. :/ Thank you for your visit and encouragement :)
Godwin Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:48 AM
Sweetie, the is excellently done. I know such a person, probably all are exposed to that personality at one time or another. This is so good - please read contest to be sure she doesn't mind the last line falling into the next (I thought I had read that, but I make mistakes more than most). This is too good to not be considered. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:03 AM
First thank you so much for the feed back and encouragement On my screen the final line fits. I guess it will depend on what screen she’s using??? XXX
Brewer Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:42 PM
An elegantly, incisively formed and expressed poem I’d protest. Well done, P.S.
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey.
Devonshire Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 12:20 PM
I plead guilty to walking away from arguments, PS. Your fibonacci is insightful. When we quit arguing our point, perhaps the other side does believe they won because they had the last word. Great entry for the contest!
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Carolyn :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:00 AM
i validate this wonder of silence when one chatters off... remarkable, charlie!..huggs
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Thank you :)
Messina Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:58 AM
This is so true, P.S. well done, enjoyed much...Charlie
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Awesome depth to your message in this poem..well written, indeed!
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your kindness. :)
Sands Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Well done P.S. I love the ending too :)
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thank you for stopping by with kind words. These comments and feed back are the reason we post here. And they keep us writing. And the more we write the better :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:53 AM
Sometimes its best to walk away even when you put the proof under their nose they still won't accept they're wrong grrrr. Well written P.S. Tom.
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:37 AM
I blush to think how many times I’ve had the “last word.” I wish I’d learned this sooner because it is liberating. Thank you :)
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January 10, 2019 at 2:27 AM
The ending is GENIUS, pure.
Awtry Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Caren thank you so much for being an encourager to me and so many! :). XXX
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Brilliant, PS. Love this.
Awtry Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Line, thank you for always being so encouraging! (encouragement makes folks more courageous, bolder, ready to take on greater challenges--what a valuable gift) xxx
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