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Wallower's Revel

Oh, how sad, oh how very glum, Goodness gracious me prater comes. Still writing winsome words of woe, Endlessly stopped, never to go. Oh Lord, let not our life pass by Let us do more than weep and cry. Wallowing in morbid abode. Endlessly stopped, never to go. Whiling away the endless hours; Scribbling sigils, claws cower. Envy those not caught in limbo Endlessly stopped, never to go. Envy the prattle on the page. At least the words are given stage. Fields upon fields, rows upon row. Endlessly stopped, never to go. Feeling your life’s left no dower. Enjoying the pain not power. Pondering heaven on life’s gallows. Endlessly stopped, never to go. Goodness gracious me, prater comes, And, all of it just, so, ho-hum. Each word stroked, petted, tilled and hoed, Endlessly stopped, never to go. And, all of it just, so, ho-hum. Leave the box, flee the asylum! Writing, writing, writing on, Endlessly stopped, never to go. All this soulless, mindless, drivel. Writing, writing, scratch and scribble; Live above your massive ego Endlessly stopped, never to go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/26/2010 3:50:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing entry so expressive and quite impressive luv.. enjoy your grand win tonight as I have enjoyed reading ...pupil...
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Debbie on your beautiful Kyrielle, deserving win . Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 2:46:00 PM
Awesom poem, Deb. Love the line about living above our massive egos. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win in contest ...........Luv/Best wishes always......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on you win Deborah. This form is rather fun. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:16:00 AM
This is very much a poetic write. I enjoyed it, Debbie Congratulations on this well deserved win,
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:58:00 AM
very well put together, keep up the good work
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Date: 3/28/2009 8:31:00 AM
The imagery in this is brilliant, Debbie! This is the most beautifu description of water that I have ever seen! Another exaple of your awesome poetry! Love Ya!
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Date: 3/27/2009 6:36:00 AM
what a beautiful and original poem.Well done!
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Date: 3/25/2009 5:37:00 PM
sorry forgot to rate
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Date: 3/25/2009 5:36:00 PM
a priceless piece about natures wonders, just one of her amazing processes that she supplies us with,,,and Thank you again for reading and commenting on my poetry,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/19/2009 4:02:00 PM
Now how do you supose i write any longer Deborah! That flash was no spark,...that was a burst ! TY again *smiles* james
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Date: 3/18/2009 3:34:00 PM
the cleansing fluid from birth to tomb,gives me lot to think about,i love this poem
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:39:00 AM
I tremble before this poem, as if critique is irreverent, pure majesty unwombing such delicate imageries of cosmos and beginnings. A doting griot gives you thanks, good write!
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Date: 3/17/2009 10:57:00 PM
very cool write deborah. lovely penned as usuall
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Date: 3/17/2009 10:32:00 PM
"Priceless treasure" for sure, as is this write. The "sustenance absorbed" so beautifully worded I could go on and on with so many touching and gripping lines. WOW> enough said. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:08:00 PM
thinking thinking thinking. john
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