Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Ballad

Revel In the Rain

Storms can come at any time
There are mountains that we climb
Sunshine helps to ease the pain
We have to revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Within the swirling squall
When your back’s against the wall
And you’re feeling so very small
Revel in the rain

Life can take us for a ride
It’s like swimming against the tide
When we lose more than we gain
It’s time to revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Looking to the sky
Spread your wings and start to fly
Let the freedom make you sigh
Revel in the rain

When you give all that you’ve got
You’ll find you’re better than you thought
You wouldn’t have grown without the pain
Raise your arms and revel in the rain

Revel in the rain
Shout to the heavens, I’m alive
Feelings of triumph I revive
When all is done I will survive
Revel in the rain

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Charlene Bird May 7, 2009 at 9:24 PM It one's life a little rain must fall, you said with so much creativity and style!

Heidie Buys October 18, 2008 at 8:16 AM Beautiful write and very wise and inspirational. Nothing better for the soul than walking barefoot in the rain. Love this one. Regards Heidie

Fathima Dawood October 16, 2008 at 1:18 AM Ah, what a lovely way of cleansing oneself. I love twirling in the rain! Excellent write Peace Fathima

Michael Torres October 15, 2008 at 11:36 AM Vince I love this poem of winning back your completeness and getting rid of life's burdens. A cleansing of the bad by rain and a resurgence of hope and triumph. Thanks for commenting on my poem about autism. You must be a special man to help those in your care. Loved the story you shared . God bless you for your Great work with children and poetry. Michael

Deneen White October 14, 2008 at 4:37 PM I love the rain, it's so peaceful and so serene, love his write, it speaks to my heart, take care D-nyce

Sharon Winter October 14, 2008 at 2:33 PM You sure have the right attitude. Must remember this inspiring poem throughout the next storm. Truly uplifting, beautiful message. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards October 14, 2008 at 12:36 PM We have to withstand a little rain in our lives...we can revel in it and learn from it! So I say....let's just jump in the puddles and have a whale of a time when it rains!! Nicely done, Vince! :) Carrie

Valerie Bellefleur October 14, 2008 at 8:39 AM We cannot stop the rain, so we might as well revel in it!

Christopher Higgins October 14, 2008 at 7:09 AM Very inspirational Vince. I want to revel in the rain when times are tought but sometimes its hard to get the motivation. Your poem sheds light to many who may feel down trodden at times. Great work.

Michael Degenhardt October 14, 2008 at 6:53 AM This is wonderfully uplifting and serves to be inspirational as well. Terrific imagery and love the repetition of the one line as it emphasizes the need to do exactly that, revel in the rain. Michael