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Going Down

I don't endorse 'going with flow'
for of course you never know
if the current will funnel
you down the drain
the tubes or flume
through the tunnel
toward the spume
to where you end up
in the sewer below
so as I'm in no rush to gush
or feel completely flushed
here and now I do avow
for me the bowl on the whole
is a non-starter a definite no-go
Form: Rhyme

Going Down In Flames

The fight is almost over 
Please come gather my remains 
Too much weight upon my shoulders 
Now I’m going down in flames 

I want to take them all down with me 
But I won’t name no names 
Maybe one of them will lift me 
As I’m going down in flames 

You have to beg forgiveness 
Only then you can be saved 
Well then can I get a witness 
‘Cause I’m going down in flames 

Now I don’t need your pitty
While I’m stepping in my grave 
All hope has died within me 
And I’m going down in flames 

~Billy Hitz~
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Quats Going Down

Theres qanon and lgbtq blm its quite a stew
I note the second i mention above have added
A plus sign that makes me buzz ! for it really
Speaks to me as i am hestro + i may get 
recognised
With lots of fuss' take heart out there all who
Are like me  we are still relevant according to
Such descriptivity '
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Going Down

A 
 Wistful
         Withdrawn
                       Grim
                            Melancholy
                                           Shrouded
                                                    the depression
                                                                      of gloomy
                                                                                    feelings                                                                   


John G. Lawless
6/5/2023

//a simple take on Emil’s Eight Word Challenge…..with apologies//
Form: Monoku

Premium Member Going Down

I’m going to hell: I’m not good with stairs
Form: Monoku


Everybody Look Whats Going Down

The time has always been near as the Lord has said
Now just being more clear as all things move ahead
Man has distanced himself in so leaving God alone
More worried about personal wealth than God’s Glory shown

A trap ready to be sprung for all those who are wandering by
Of praises being left unsung by an inept ability to even try
A roadway filled with snares hidden from the naked eye
So worried of earthly cares thus dismissing what could belie 

Once the time has passed there will be no turning back
For what one has not amassed  is for what one will lack
The fork no longer in the road, it is simply a straight run
But what is now owed in not so recognizing God’s only Son

The sun will continue to set and the moon will still rise
But in what you have let you will now come to realize
Being far from the Word is simply fellowship with the enemy
It hasn’t occurred because the enemy doesn’t want you to see



https://youtu.be/gp5JCrSXkJY
Form: Rhyme

Going Down In Dark

When the sun goes down and dark
A lizard takes his time to meditate
It could just as easily be a female
But who am I to judge or take a look
I respect other creatures rights to privacy

When the lizard decides to sleep it stops
Lays a weary head upon a rail road tie 
Drifts into a reptilian sleep of peace
An ever present smile on its leathery face

An uninvited train goes speeding bullet by
On an otherwise pleasant evening breeze
Male or female impacts do not matter to the tracks
At this hour trains should take a nap or little brake

We can only imagine what it was dreaming
Perhaps of insects on a sticky tongue 
Perhaps there is an afterlife for lizards napping
Who sleep on railroad tracks then splatter
Who become no more of life's small mysteries
While stranger things still happen after that


Authors Note:  A lizard of undetermined gender should be remembered.

The Pleasure of Going Down Memory Lane

The ecstasy of a silky bed
Warm covers and soft pillows
All I want is to sink there 
And get carried away in hollows
Of the path of past memories.
 
Mum smiling and hugging me
like in a maze, I hear my giggles.
Dad chases me and catches me.
Delicious sensation brings wriggles 
And laughter echoes in my ears. 

Careless little feet of childhood
ventures boldly leaping time 
year after year, with gleaming eyes,
blowing candles in melodious rhyme.
Proud another year is gone.

My eyes flow open and I rise in trance.
An angelic face seeks in the mirror
Those days never to come back.
I can see the images, all so clearer
And a poignant pain pierces my heart.

My arms surround myself for a hug.
How I miss that carefree moment,
Of sublime confidence in my dreams 
I acknowledge defeat and victory.
Be it today my atonement.

Everyone is born to complete the phases of life.
Alas! If they could know...I was once a kid too!
Form: Rhyme

Going Down

some one asked
where i was going
going down
downtown

just take this
one way street
all the way down
to her town

it's a wonderful
place parking
rubbernecking
a garden plot

that thickens
with climbing
roses so rosy
taking time

to smell
the wine 
take a sip
taste bud swish

always good
to pair
with
the proper dish

Premium Member Going Down Under

Going Down Under!

Toes step, from dry to wet sand 
Foot sinks, bathes in waves 
Whoosh, waves splash ankles to toes
Cold, cool water, how far should I go?

Waves pulls back, pulls sand into sea
Feet step, from wet to wetter sand
Feet sink, deeper in still
Cold, cool water, how far should I go?

Whoosh, waves splash ankles to knees
Waves deciding, I’m getting wetter
Whoosh, waves splash, knees to belly
Knees jelly, with my jelly belly

Whoosh, waves crash, belly to chest
Waves deciding, I’m falling backwards
Whoosh, waves smash, above me,
Falling, crawling, Going Down Under!

Noels_Art

Comments: Sometimes the water’s cold.  FEEDBACK WELCOME.
Form: Rhyme

As I Saw the Coffin Going Down

AS I SAW THE COFFIN GOING DOWN

My heart bled
My eyes turned red
My aunt said
My child don't be sad
Because of pain
I was even losing my brain
My tears were like rain
Flowed from my eyes now and again
I was told this too shall pass
And my joy will grow up again like grass
To be strong I was told
My arms were fold
My eyes I closed
I prayed to the Lord
I prayed to my God
As I saw the coffin going down
On my knees I fell
As I saw the coffin going down
I sang with my soul it is well

PoeticMonwa
Form: Rhyme

Going Down

When Doc Johnson and his boy Jimmy,
Crossed the old bridge it started to squeak
Half way across,the bridge gave out
They fell forty foot down to a creek!

They sure were not expecting that.
When someone took them back to town,
Doc said, "We didn't really get hurt,"
"But it was a hell of a ride going down!"
Form: Quatrain

Going Down In Flames

Toxic love in its truest form.
I cannot let you go but, 
I cannot conform.
Many years of tears, 
and raised fists. 
Too many of course, 
we are both recidivists.
You finally went to the leave, 
but I cannot let you go.... 
I cannot let us end this way, 
I have to be able to show... 
I love that I held in me, 
and did not pass your way.
The sweet words that are still to be said, 
and also the words I didn't say. 
You want me to trust you,
But there are so many lies that you spun.
The horrible things that you have done to me,
They can never be undone.

Going Down Under

Typing in a chat room one day 
I met a chick from Tasmania. 
She was quite vivacious and gay, 
(Kylie Minogue, only brainier). 

I taught her several new terms, 
but what I said might have shocked her. 
She asked, "Can computers spread germs? 
I'd better call the Flying Doctor!" 
And I said 

Do you come from a land down under, 
where women know, and men blunder? 
Would the sexes survive asunder? 
I don't know, but it makes me wonder. 

I said, "I can show you Devon, 
or even Rome or Paris." 
You want a stairway to heaven? 
Sorry -- I'm not Rolf Harris." 

She said she'd loosen her stays, 
If I didn't sully her or bully her. 
She said, "I'm always looking both ways, 
just like Natalie Imbruglia." 
And I said 

Do you come from a land down under, 
where women crow, and men thunder? 
Would the sexes survive asunder? 
I don't know, but it makes me wonder.
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Going Down the Drain

Another Atlantic City hotel-casino is going away.
The once-esteemed Taj Majal closes its doors after Labor Day.
It has a big casino with tables and machines galore.
There are posh restaurants, a state-of-the art theater, and much more.
This place is truly a landmark at the New Jersey Shore.
However, it will be a part of history, and not around anymore.
The hotel still bears a presidential candidate's name.
In recent years, it has fallen into financial shame.
It's been awhile since that man has been at the establishment.
These days, he's too busy running for President.
Not long ago, he had four hotels in the city.
Soon he will have none.  Does that seem like a pity?

from a news story found on New York Daily News.com
Form: Rhyme

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