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A Wistful Withdrawn Grim Melancholy Shrouded the depression of gloomy feelings John G. Lawless 6/5/2023 //a simple take on Emil’s Eight Word Challenge…..with apologies//

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Date: 6/4/2023 2:49:00 PM
love the structure and the message - so few words speak volumes John! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/4/2023 2:26:00 PM
Not without merit John. Of course, you need to italicise or bold the eight words to get away with such poetic high jinks :)
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