John Lawless Poet Monoku

Going Down

A 
 Wistful
         Withdrawn
                       Grim
                            Melancholy
                                           Shrouded
                                                    the depression
                                                                      of gloomy
                                                                                    feelings                                                                   


John G. Lawless
6/5/2023

//a simple take on Emil’s Eight Word Challenge…..with apologies//

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Jan Allison June 4, 2023 at 2:49 PM love the structure and the message - so few words speak volumes John! hugs Jan xx