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Funeral of Fireflies - Fibonacci

Rot
Blood
Warm husk
Crushed rib cage
Pustule burst of light
Searing through the heavy black lung
Trapped in a breathless, weeping shroud of the stagnant air
We watch the ruined summer spark, drowning inside of a glass chamber where the dead things scream against the cold, tearing our bleeding hearts apart
Burning the skin away to feed the starving shadows deep in the hollow night, we watch the final frantic flutter char to ash, reduced to nothing underneath indifferent stars, forgotten by the cold, silent universe.

Premium Member Cosmos

Starlight
  Gleams bright

Deep space
   Dark place

Black hole
   Eats whole

Dwarf star
  So far

Cosmos
   Not close

Night skies
   Moonrise

Stellar
   Dweller

Spaceship
   Long trip

Hot sun
   Fire spun

Blue moon
  Mates swoon

Sand dunes
   On moons 

Pulsar
   Quick star

Eclipse
   Sun slips

Red mars
  Fight spars

Gas rings
  Weird things

Pluto
   No show

IO
   Moon glow

Dead star
   Burned char

Aries
   Pisces

Destrier, Dismantle

Destroyer, discrepancies.
How to sort them out?
Dismantle, then fire post-freeze.
River, run rue rout.

Destrier, to break mid-stride.
Sacrifice a pawn.
Midnight train, buy ticket, ride.
That will mow the lawn.

Priceless? Quite a prize? Surmise.
In passing? En prise.
Ring? Alchemy. Arcane? Rise.
Stifled cries? No lies.

Falconer, thy widening gyre.
Second coming? Now.
Come and see? Fine funeral pyre.
Live wire, take a bow!

Broil and char? From near to far.
Muskellunge and gar.
Peacocks pretty, poison par.
Dream, seem. Lead. Red star.

Serenity? Stable, sage.
Madness, mycophage.
Roundabout, rill. Rusty cage.
Symptoms mad, thy age.

Ark electric, how you burn.
Tones, burst sonic flame.
Mind cartoons? Ashes in urn.
Same game? Claim the name.

Armies, mechanize and wail.
Never end, our tale.
Weak resistance stale, you fail.
Blaspheme, boil and bail.

Silver, sickles. Red regrets.
Automaton, glean:
He who risks it all once bets.
Wind and wintergreen...


Premium Member Char says she has No Opinions

Do not ask me for an opinion Char said
I don’t have them

This amazes me
I follow her around for days, listening to her talk
She has opinions on everything

the sky, the moon, the sidewalk, the streetlights,
the neighbors, her friends, her relatives,
Her opinions come out with every breath she takes

She is actually more opinionated than most
Which also proves
she is disillusioned or a liar

Premium Member Tangy Sips Of Poetry Soup

Slow- fire gleams across the horizon 
as I  gather words from  twig-like strips
adding  creamy broth to stir the brew
under a  moonlight of summer’s heat … 
The mellow breeze warms  my  thoughts
where hands pour lemon mint, in a campfire
kindling  essence of lines for Poetry Soup:
then to   grasp fireflies brightly adorned
until  cheeks flush with tales spun nightlong.

The purée explodes  to drink the light
of my muse, her delicacy  soaked in potion
with a  dash of tangy sage to flame verse 
or rhyme        Oh the meal  is simple
but rich,  delicious,    releasing a flavour
uncommon   even to me… a  concoction
different each time ,   when a tribe's mix
of language , time zone, and blogs heal, 
excite, and  char each sip of soup
blended from the heart’s campfire.


POTD and 1st prize premier glory

Premium Member Gainesville Four Went Missing

Gainesville Four went missing on Halloween Night 1974
Three friends and a mother of the youngest one, Fee Fore
Fee’s real name was Fiona, and she was a delight
As were her friends Char and Lynne who went missing that night

Though this was fifty-one years back, there has never been a trace
Whatever happened to these four, must have been erased.
Not a neck bone or a leg bone, a tooth or any DNA
Nothing has shown up of the women who went away

Their purses were found in the house, next to the front door
It is as if they were marched out, maybe by more than four
The parents of two of the girls left this earth without knowing
What happened to their daughters on Halloween that was snowing

There were no prints, because the snow melted by morning time
Their cars were in the driveway – red, black, blue and lime.
Gainesville Four have been missing for fifty-one years I’m afraid.
I wonder if they were taken by aliens out of this Everglade?


Through Smoke and Laughter, Thanksgiving Holds

Through Smoke and Laughter, Thanksgiving Holds
By Alan J Winters 
The oven groans, the timer fails,  
the turkey smolders, smoke prevails.  
Children cough, the dog runs wild,  
chaos reigns, yet spirits smile.  
The table wobbles, a leg gives way,  
gravy spills in a tidal spray.  
Uncle trips on the welcome mat,  
still insists, “It’s perfect imagine that!”  
Through burned pies and forgotten rolls,  
we stitch together fractured wholes.  
Candles flicker, power dies,  
yet stories rise where silence lies.  
Grandma hums an old refrain,  
her voice a lantern through the rain.  
We pass the plates, we share the bread,  
tradition lives in what is said.  
For every mishap, every fall,  
the feast is not the food at all.  
It’s hands that reach, it’s hearts that mend,  
it’s gathering close when troubles bend.  
So let the turkey char and crack,  
we’ll laugh, we’ll love, we’ll circle back.  
Through smoke and laughter, tears and song,  
Thanksgiving keeps us holds us strong.

Premium Member He seems to be

He seems to be the pompous sort;
looks down his nose at us and snorts~
"your poems are subpar 
and only fit as char" ~
in the judgement of his self-made court!

Postscript: If the shoe don't fit don't try to put it on.

Premium Member Lost

Amid the fire of twilight sun
I wish I knew my way
horizon’s char and moonlight’s shun
has ashed my hope   I pray

for dark cloud constellation to free
a cosmic steed for me to flee gunshot streets
for primrose to steal my yellow jaundice
and burn the itch in incense of roadside stars

for me to follow  scent and sight 
and find forsaken door
to open with my key contrite
a waif who’s lost no more

but gods of dirt and sky refuse
this pessimist with optimist dreams
side-of-road primrose mowed—  as needle holes
grow my nebulae-scars of blown-vein bruises

a morphine horse runs dirty track 
while stars in alley air
just stare and offer not but black
expanse    —my nowhere lair

Back in the USSR

June 21, 2025

For the Beatles 'Lay it to Me' song Contest by Charles Messina


The old iron curtain came down
But soon a clown reclaimed the crown
Ruthless and hollow-souled he rose
Now a foul Soviet wind blows
From the east it battered Ukraine
Spreading such cruel and endless pain
The past returns in blackened char
“Back in the U.S.S.R.”

Premium Member N A T O aloud

HOH TELL NO VEMBER GOLF

al fah
  row me oh
you nee form
    eck oh
ecks ray

in dee ah
   see airrah
wiss key
yang key
    zoo loo

foks trot
mike
    tang oh
oss cah
     jew lee ett

pah pah
vik tah
char lee

keh beck
  lee mah
dell tah


        bra voh !

well said

Premium Member Frantic Night

Chaos reigns, oh, such a sight,
Kids are screaming, parents feuding fight.
Turkey is spoiled, oven's on strike,
Lightning struck, there's no light.
The Bliss is so forlorn
The Bliss is so forlorn

The dog pissed on the presents
One of many such awful events
The cat's stuck to the star
Its fur has begun to char
The night of hell is born
The night of hell is born

Tommy was chased, the table felled
All the food scattered expelled
The entrees landed in Granny's lap 
Just when she was taking a nap. 
Silent Night is torn to scorn!
Silent Night is torn to scorn!

Still the tree lights twinkle 
A glitter of joy a sprinkle
Despite the wrinkle and crinkle,
I hear Kris Kringle's tinkle
Frantic Night, Chaotic Night!
Frantic Night, Chaotic Night!

Premium Member looking for a deadringer

Char, his new wife
was a deadringer for his old wife
a woman he divorced when he met Char
she would not be accepted by his children
or his friends
or his parents
he and Char had one fine year together
and five horrible ones
before he discovered a younger deadringer named Maisy.

Undoing What You Have Done

I will try and hide the
mushroom cloud and restore
the skinless bodies, I will
un-char the charred, reassemble 
the dead children, I will then
un-vitrify the rocks and the sand and
rebuild cities and cafes and hope; 

undoing your atrocities is high
on my list, just
leave me enough milk
for morning

YOUR SHARES OF THE CHEERS

Your intelligence, as good as driving amazing cars,
You dole out goodness, generously to all your pals,
Your wisdom, unassailably perches on the highest bar,
While foolish people, buried their's in a maar.

Your smiles burn sadness to a char,
Your beauty invites love to a chair,
Your kindness takes friendship a distance far,
The love you share is without a fear.

Your greatness, noone can ever dare,
In your heart, God's love is already there,
In the eyes of your enemies are rains of tears,
Meanwhile, to your prayers, God has his listening ears.

To your successes, God is always giving you cheers,
In divine blessings, God gave you the largest shares,
The toga of celestial favours, God made you a nice one to wear,
Heavenly salvation, God turns it into your special ware.

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