He seems to be

He seems to be the pompous sort;
looks down his nose at us and snorts~
"your poems are subpar 
and only fit as char" ~
in the judgement of his self-made court!

Postscript: If the shoe don't fit don't try to put it on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alhemaidy Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 6:39 PM
I hate pompous! I liked your poem, very enjoyed read. Thanks for sharing your poem! Have a nice time ~ AA
Cornish Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Snicker - don't know about the shoe, but the poem fits!
Achara Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Yes. The situation was perfect for a Limmerick.
Nicole Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:41 PM
Hmm, yes, he seems to be as you say. I like your postscript, because it holds so much truth. ~ Brandy
Achara Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:51 AM
Thank you. Limericks are not my favorite poetry form, but sometimes it's just perfect.
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