Say Something

Shards of ice
Stuck in throat
Burning sideways
Bitter char
Need to speak
Nothing rises
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 3:30 PM
This is such a profound, powerful verse. Brilliant choice of dramatic words. Real impact on the reader especially the last line. Great writing. Thank you for sharing. :)
Boerger Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and encouragement!
Silence Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:28 PM
Wow..the power and brilliance of this piece, said in just a few words, so profound and deep! I am in awe of your amazing work of art, divine poet!
Boerger Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:35 PM
Your kindness means the world, thank you for your comment!
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