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Twinkle Twinkle Parody

Simmer ember tiny star Supernova from a far Azure wave through the void Shattering marbles like glass toys Simmer ember tiny star Supernova all to char

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/24/2024 5:44:00 PM

I loved this! "All to char"- "Simmer ember" deep writing

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/25/2024 3:46:00 AM

Thank you, this was for a contest, fun

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/12/2024 9:19:00 AM

Yess I love parodies! This flows perfectly! See u again soon...XOxo Writing, Writing, Poetess Vocabulary to impress Deep and dark she'll extol Death, and sin and hit her goal Writing, writing, Poetess I love your darkness, I confess!

Tom Woody
Date: 7/12/2024 5:10:00 PM

You so funny!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/12/2024 6:31:00 AM

I like it, though I would change through in line 3 to throughout for better meter, and line 4 interrupts the awesome flow altogether. Still, a worthy little bugger

Tom Woody
Date: 7/13/2024 12:26:00 PM

Ooh you've got to post an audio now. You let the cat out ...

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/13/2024 11:16:00 AM

On the piano it sings the same to the tune, sings the same, still poetic, I get in trouble for this a lot if you notice I have my own rhythmic meter and style….

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 7/12/2024 4:56:00 AM

Very nice! Great! Congratulations!

Beatrix Macabre
Date: 7/12/2024 5:00:00 AM

Thank you, hope you enjoyed