Astir Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Nascent Town Astir

Shawls,
of dream,
clouds droll wink,
serene skim oe’r,
dark grey urban plinths,
that pierce glazed amber sky,
sonic bell toll’s eardrum plops,
impetus to stir first flush throng,  
plumes of steam from gurgling pool billow,
a fickle fountain sprinkles high-pitch wail

Premium Member Dancing in the Dark

So clamorous in clouds of gray,
to shake once tranquil bliss astir;
reluctantly, it joined the fray,
a tumult tango beckoned her.

On every churning white-capped wave,
where breaths in howling echoes dwell,
they dance ashore and misbehave
where nature's fates forbade, foretell.

Fandango spins upon the seas
where tempests tease a tropic storm,
what once was born a peaceful breeze
now grows in yield, now comes the swarm.

Infatuation's flashing glances
aroused the night beyond the fears
to where once heedful caution dances
to where a love forgets the tears.

So brief, it seems, excitement dwells,
upon the crest of raptured swells...

Premium Member Shattered Vow

How brittle can the ruin of this heart slay
Like furrowed weeds burned into cinder , 
When church's flowers turn ebon and droop
As winds do not return... nothing moves
 Not even air- chimes in their hazy curves:
*
I watch my own body... it becomes a stranger Melting like an anonymous outline 
That enters the dark through crushed wails... 
He is nowhere , not even a shadow flapping 
While a eulogy of  abandonment goes unsung, *
*
My fingers quiver in front of an altar…
pain grating the most benevolent
of prayers , chafed by slices of eve
that have no syllables for me…
For on this day, a deserted betrothal 
leaves me hanging , hanging on a  choir's loft.

And night  breezes wash over me vanishing,
That I gaze at my bridal bouquet slowly astir...
A shattered  vow, a runaway groom
Cry I must, in solo of dreaded season,
Waiting for hushabye to put me to sleep.


Premium Member Ode To Hamilton

My svelte bushy tailed cat, Hamilton, whose praises I laud,
leapt  onto my lap and purred in a jittery fashion because,
a whiff of marked shift in daily routine,
she did pick up from my nonverbal long body waves, 
each earnest habit once set in stone an absent without trace,
my darling pet  so alert would detect the slightest tweak,
and spell out how the goal post now astir smelt fishy, 
Hamilton, a character so utterly oozes otherworld charm,
as is the wont of divine feline species beyond limit,
and with impishness a constant  in the past this pet of mine,
would  latch on to each  prized  item as if driven to whisk them  away,
that  guilt free shrewd smirk  infernal innocent methinks,
why me no I wouldn’t bug, irk, upset one so precious as you,
or tear at your tender heart haphazardly  in an inane quest,
for  nose-rubbing notice, deep bond playful jest,
as  I peer  in awe at that dainty trot whilst on the prowl, 
a misty eyed me recalled her  fond cat laugh bag of tricks, 
yet to hear a taxi outside beep is a less than warm reminder, 
that I must depart though unwilling from Hamilton’s grasp,
bursting into a sob as she stared from the stair top

Premium Member Astir

Cinqopet

Upon the path I walk tonight,
 Beneath the pale and silver light,
  The world appears so very white.
 A delicate snowy scene,
Serene, almost like a dream.

The wind has started up a song,
 It sings of things that went along,
  The winter days are growing long.
 I watched the bare branches high,
Touch the cold and moonless sky.

My little horse must think it strange,
 To stop without a farm in range,
  No other travelers exchange.
 The lone sound is a soft sweep,
While the world is fast asleep.

I feel a call to linger here,
 To face my future without fear,
  To hold the moment very dear.
 I have promises to keep,
Before my gentle long sleep.

I know the journey has no end,
 Around each curve, the pathways bend,
  On forces I can not depend.
 The path ahead, dark and vast,
My silent choice, here at last.

A snowflake briefs a horse’s blink.

Premium Member An Insomniac

 

              An insomniac awake,
        with nights in a real mess !
             Oh, one can try many things;
    music, meditation, baths,
                   writing poetry, praying,
          with minds astir and racing. 
          Or give up and do housework !


Astir

Iridescent crow wings
scatter ice particles, patches of air clatter.

Grackle claws engrave the frozen creek,
small owls emerge from blanching shadows,
fieldmice burrow into snow drifts.

A small stir in the flappable; facets
dazzle a dazed daylight.

A newly unearthed sky pauses to blink
life stutters, shimmers back
twice as bright.

Sleepless

Sleepless

Dogs are howling.
Cats are yowling.
Stomach's growling.
Just want a nap.

Mowers mow.
Blowers blow.
Planes are low.
Please, a bit of kip.

A fly astir .
An AC's whirr.
Roaring roadster.
Just forty winks.

Telly's off.
Party's over.
Almost aslee...
Have to pee.

-Grim

Premium Member When You Are Old

My love is silent as I slumber on,
A day rises beyond my window frame,
And in my fragile body, I grow lame,
But I found a mirror all decked and don.

What odds that a looking-glass cause, Alice,
Placed outdoors I can see a younger me,
Under the sun, I am basking carefree,
Passing familiars whom I cherish.

A reddish sun drawing a purple glow,
A bedroom grows darker a bit astir,
Routines of a day, now a slumberer,
As a mirror stood still in the shadow.

Premium Member Shuffling Through

Inspired by the Onomatopoeia Contest (2024), sponsored by Emile Pinet.

Mid-day invaded my spirits with blah. 
I sauntered the path to the coffee shop
and heard my friends blabbing on endlessly,
astir with the recent barista flop.

I swallowed a mouthful of latte,
gagged and gargled with an unwanted flush
of caramel nut crème tickling my throat.
It made my gustatory senses gush.

After much gurgling, I gulped and groaned,
spilling the foamy froth with a loud plop.
My spirits sizzled and snapped 
with the luscious last loud drop.

Having quenched my fraudulent thirst 
I selfishly, yet successfully, bashed
the doleful doldrums that attended me.
I hiccupped along home and crashed.

Premium Member Sea Glass

The Sea Glass Fifth Aquarius,
a glass menagerie,
as their bios serenade us,
sea views anemone.

I swarm betwixt a Sea of Glass,
a can of worms opened,
we dove had fluttered peace a chance,
debate and hook defend.

Dolphins parlayed high nibs false skies,
the Sea Glass crample them,
their dimpled snout closer to eyes,
in blues abyss, they swam.

Little shop around four corners,
the which is of Sea Glass,
Stew astir perpendiculars,
Suze, Miche, Cher, picturesque.

Sea Glass, Scottish accents; you rain,
ode Yellow River,
shove all our rights tad off the lane,
bowl poetry Super.

Premium Member It's Open Season

Mysterious displacement of matters where
Spring forgets like fumbling fingers in blossoms
arresting visions lingering colossal
                         ~jewels rule pastimes

Then Summer entertains those withering loss
call a drummer accost this way in breaths pools
beached conch shells malingering orange descends
                         ~warms young beater's suite

A lifting Fall of memories beset heaps
across retiring boughs release the neglect
obliged astir spiced slumbers of golden birds
                         ~chop resounds a weigh

Jack Frost recalled when Winter stalled -- cold resolve
blue glacier iceberg Irish temperature
pleased those icy treats cool in rime or freeze in
                         ~luck pulls north-south poles.

Premium Member Spring Winning Bloom

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       here comes her crowning
    astir whilst mine defends hern
             az pinkest tulip

Unadorned

"For loveliness needs not the foreign aid of ornament, but is when unadorned, adorned the most" 
                     - James Thomson

She stood there unadorned, yet he loved her
For she left his simple heart all astir
Complicated she was, he understood
Their pairing made in heaven, it was good
Life sometimes works in miraculous ways
It brought them together, still does amaze
Unadorned before, now she's his soul queen
He feels like a king with a crown unseen
Joined forever by a bond that can't break
She is his to adorn, protect and take.

Premium Member Eager Bard Imbued

Lemon tinted phase
gilded skyline blown
by ethereal fused mist 
eager bard imbued 
opal dream flotilla  
beyond tarnish while
flash point chariots 
of gleam-well canvass
astir or astern perforce 
taunt a hued vase 
porcelain image fest
for stoic earthbound 
soul’s cry parched 
stoic migrant famish 
sapphire plume ray
bounty veridical
pink chalk sketch
granule blush pots
pearl beam spur 
to jumpy pilgrim 
white elephant garb
drifter’s lull prone 
metre of skewed 
and barren glib
dull tossed aside 
rambles and brambles 
from cerebral quartz
grey quirky quill 
nose twitch petrichor
glacé smelt rain   
lava veined fillip 
fervent  fetal floe
ignited indigo inkling 
as noonday nuanced
glance en dash
away from orange 
peel cloud skies 
toward spring rush
urban junction fare
as founding cue
for zeitgeist driven 
western world eden

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