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Eager Bard Imbued

Lemon tinted phase
gilded skyline blown
by ethereal fused mist 
eager bard imbued 
opal dream flotilla  
beyond tarnish while
flash point chariots 
of gleam-well canvass
astir or astern perforce 
taunt a hued vase 
porcelain image fest
for stoic earthbound 
soul’s cry parched 
stoic migrant famish 
sapphire plume ray
bounty veridical
pink chalk sketch
granule blush pots
pearl beam spur 
to jumpy pilgrim 
white elephant garb
drifter’s lull prone 
metre of skewed 
and barren glib
dull tossed aside 
rambles and brambles 
from cerebral quartz
grey quirky quill 
nose twitch petrichor
glacé smelt rain   
lava veined fillip 
fervent  fetal floe
ignited indigo inkling 
as noonday nuanced
glance en dash
away from orange 
peel cloud skies 
toward spring rush
urban junction fare
as founding cue
for zeitgeist driven 
western world eden
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Elliott Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 9:36 AM
What a breathtakingly natural poem enhanced with the joy of your words, Howard. Grandissimo and my warmest wishes for all your wondrous writing. March onward, good friend. ~
Elliott Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 4:25 PM
And Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's contest. Bravo!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 9:12 AM
So many colorful and beautiful words. This reminds of a form that uses just a few syllables in each line, but I forgot the name for it. Thanks for commenting to my poem.
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Dear Howard, your excellent poem takes the reader on a journey through various landscapes and emotions, using vivid imagery and poetic devices to create a dreamlike atmosphere. Your rhythm is fluid and melodic, with a mix of long and short lines that convey a sense of movement and flow. Well done my friend
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