** Poetic Form: Sapphic Stanza Inspired: 2024 June 16 Image: N/A
Mysterious displacement of matters where Spring forgets like fumbling fingers in blossoms arresting visions lingering colossal ~jewels rule pastimes Then Summer entertains those withering loss call a drummer accost this way in breaths pools beached conch shells malingering orange descends ~warms young beater's suite A lifting Fall of memories beset heaps across retiring boughs release the neglect obliged astir spiced slumbers of golden birds ~chop resounds a weigh Jack Frost recalled when Winter stalled -- cold resolve blue glacier iceberg Irish temperature pleased those icy treats cool in rime or freeze in ~luck pulls north-south poles.
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