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Unadorned

"For loveliness needs not the foreign aid of ornament, but is when unadorned, adorned the most" - James Thomson She stood there unadorned, yet he loved her For she left his simple heart all astir Complicated she was, he understood Their pairing made in heaven, it was good Life sometimes works in miraculous ways It brought them together, still does amaze Unadorned before, now she's his soul queen He feels like a king with a crown unseen Joined forever by a bond that can't break She is his to adorn, protect and take.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:21:00 PM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:24:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - Beautiful written :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 11:30:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Your "Unadorned" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 9:01:00 AM
Ah Jo [sigh]. This is so beautifully constructed and romantic. I feel your mutual love and attraction in your words.;) Congratulations my friend! :) PS: you and Subminal have the same take on unadorned.
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Date: 3/26/2024 6:13:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning and so very well written dear joanna, i love the soulful manner youv expressed and written this. Especially “ Unadorned before, now she's his soul queen He feels like a king with a crown unseen “ heartfelt and clever rhymes too. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:21:00 AM
Your "Unadorned" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/20/2024 12:14:00 PM
so beautiful, both the idea and how you conveyed it
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Date: 3/18/2024 4:43:00 PM
such a unique but lovely romance poem. It was soulful and spoke to the unexplainable, miraculous matches and enduring relationships. True love and affection don't require anything...simplicity is the operative word. Definitely a poem of POTD caliber. have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/18/2024 9:17:00 AM
I do not like women with too much cosmetics. Sometimes simplicity is more beautiful.
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Date: 3/18/2024 7:52:00 AM
Dear Joanna, I loved how your poem beautifully embodies the essence of true love and the beauty found in simplicity. Through eloquent words, you capture the depth of connection between two souls, emphasizing that true love transcends external adornments. It touches on the power of genuine affection and the magic of love's unadorned purity. - Blessings, Daniel
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