Unadorned

"For loveliness needs not the foreign aid of ornament, but is when unadorned, adorned the most" 
                     - James Thomson

She stood there unadorned, yet he loved her
For she left his simple heart all astir
Complicated she was, he understood
Their pairing made in heaven, it was good
Life sometimes works in miraculous ways
It brought them together, still does amaze
Unadorned before, now she's his soul queen
He feels like a king with a crown unseen
Joined forever by a bond that can't break
She is his to adorn, protect and take. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I like the quote too, hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:24 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - Beautiful written :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Your "Unadorned" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Enjoy your day/win..............
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Ah Jo [sigh]. This is so beautifully constructed and romantic. I feel your mutual love and attraction in your words.;) Congratulations my friend! :) PS: you and Subminal have the same take on unadorned.
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:13 AM
This is absolutely stunning and so very well written dear joanna, i love the soulful manner youv expressed and written this. Especially “ Unadorned before, now she's his soul queen He feels like a king with a crown unseen “ heartfelt and clever rhymes too. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 8:21 AM
Your "Unadorned" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.......................
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 12:14 PM
so beautiful, both the idea and how you conveyed it
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 9:17 AM
I do not like women with too much cosmetics. Sometimes simplicity is more beautiful.
Rodgers Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Dear Joanna, I loved how your poem beautifully embodies the essence of true love and the beauty found in simplicity. Through eloquent words, you capture the depth of connection between two souls, emphasizing that true love transcends external adornments. It touches on the power of genuine affection and the magic of love's unadorned purity. - Blessings, Daniel
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