Dancing in the Dark

So clamorous in clouds of gray,
to shake once tranquil bliss astir;
reluctantly, it joined the fray,
a tumult tango beckoned her.

On every churning white-capped wave,
where breaths in howling echoes dwell,
they dance ashore and misbehave
where nature's fates forbade, foretell.

Fandango spins upon the seas
where tempests tease a tropic storm,
what once was born a peaceful breeze
now grows in yield, now comes the swarm.

Infatuation's flashing glances
aroused the night beyond the fears
to where once heedful caution dances
to where a love forgets the tears.

So brief, it seems, excitement dwells,
upon the crest of raptured swells...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodgers Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 8:16 AM
Hi Craig, congrats on POTD; that is beautifully written! I love how you use a brewing sea storm as a metaphor for passion. Phrases like 'tumult tango' and 'tempests tease' perfectly capture the chaotic rush of infatuation. I think your rhythm is absolutely captivating. Blessings, Daniel
Cornish Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Honored Daniel, thank you!
Toney Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 8:04 AM
Love the alliteration, Craig — “clamorous in clouds; tumult tango; white-capped wave; tempests tease a tropic storm.” A belated congratulations on Poem of the Day.
Cornish Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Thank you Mark!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Dancing in the Dark" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Cornish Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 5:39 AM
Thanks so much Paula
Empress Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 12:19 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD dear Craigszy. What can I say. Its an honor for soupers, to have your profound poetry featured, for all of us to feel and appreciate. Sending you light always ~
Cornish Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:44 AM
Very kind Dear Inky - thanks again...
Mcintosh Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 10:18 PM
Oh, amazing... Congrats on POTD
Cornish Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Regina
Nicole Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 6:40 PM
' On every churning white-capped wave, where breaths in howling echoes dwell, they dance ashore and misbehave. ' It sounds like the weather is being a little playful, yet very naughty. Congratulations Craig, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:23 PM
Thanks so much Brandy
La France Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 6:35 PM
Craig, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Constance
Parker Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 6:13 PM
Stellar performance, Craig. Could absolutely feel this one. :-))
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:24 PM
Many thanks Arlo
Anaya Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:56 PM
There's so much to say about a wordsmith who has tango & the fandango in mind, dance is everything, everywhere. Congratulations! Blessings
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:25 PM
Thank you...wish I could actually tango!
Smith  Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:03 PM
A well earned POTD congratulations.
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Allison
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 2:49 PM
they dance ashore and misbehave where nature's fates forbade, foretell…Congrats, Craig,on POTD!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:27 PM
Thanks very much Kim
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 1:55 PM
Hello Craig Cornish :-) Enjoyed read! Congratulations on your nice POTD! Have a wonderful day!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:28 PM
Thank you Abdullah
Sharma  Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:50 AM
Dear Craig, this poem really filled my heart with immense emotions of exhilaration, how beautifully you've described those palpitating beats of excitement and infatuation.. that sizzle with the sparks of love.. so breathtaking your imagery is! The streaks that swell up and long for a waltz with those whispers that sing with affection... "Fandango spins upon the seas where tempests tease a tropic storm" awwwn adore that lil tingling tease! The alliteration is fantastic! Heartiest congratulations on POTD!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:28 PM
Very kind Hiya, thank you
Lawless Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 5:46 AM
"We need a bigger boat"...The words themselves the sting of icy rain and passion's heated flashes....
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Thanks my friend
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 5:31 AM
nicely penned, sir...congrats on your POTD designation.
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Thank you Sara
Scragg Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 5:20 AM
Amazing imagery Craig! :-D huge congrats on POTD
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Thank you Natasha (love your name)
DiMino Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 4:56 AM
Very nice, Craig. Congratulations on POTD!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Thanks so much Joe
Gibbons Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful well deserved POTD I can tell Craig ts flowed from your heart n soul feel passiin through it all hugs <3
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:32 PM
Thank you Dorothy
Kitchin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:33 AM
Craig, beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTD.
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Tania
Croft Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 2:34 AM
congratulations on your POTD!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Karen
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 1:03 AM
- A lovely poem Craig, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Jones Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 12:41 AM
“On every churning white-capped wave, where breaths in howling echoes dwell, they dance ashore and misbehave where nature's fates forbade, foretell.” Love this! Congratulations on a romantic potd!
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:29 PM
Than k you Karen
Edmonds  Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations Craig on having received Poem of the Day for your wonderful write… Beryl
Cornish Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Beryl
Empress Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:00 PM
The pull of passion and love dear Craigsz, I felt it deeply as I read this very beautiful poem that not only flows with such intimate love and infatuation, but also has such vivid imagery and cadence that made me see through your lines, and ofcourse it has a lyrical touch to it. Which is addictive! "Fandango spins upon the seas where tempests tease a tropic storm," how youve used the oceanic metaphors here is very clever and creative and yes artistic too! Subtle use of alliterations and the brief but picturesque capture of desire makes me want more ~ love at its freshest stage always is so very unforgettable! You seem to have the eye of a love guru dear Craigsz! This is brilliance! A fave for me! Sending you light always ~
Cornish Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 4:52 AM
Indy, honored by your thoughtful response--this write is actually my thoughts about my current contest 'Ceraunophillia', because thunder and lightening storms are sort of like the infatuation stage of relationships ~ exhilaration mixed with fear? Much fun!
Bianco Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Hi Craig, you are the wine poet. You get better with age. Nicely written, impeccable flow dreamy quality God Bless Anthony
Cornish Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Thanks so much Anthony...
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