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Chat GPT Writes Poetry

Blog Posted:2/2/2023 4:37:00 PM

 

Hello all. It's been a while since I've shown my face. I kind of dropped out after the 2016 election. Anyway here I am again.

A few years ago I published a blog about what I called cyborg poetry where there were text generators which sampled Twitter feeds and selected iambic pentameter lines and spit out rhyming couplets.

The topic of AI generated poetry may have been discussed here since then, but I have been playing with ChatGPT and on a whim decided to challenge it to write some poems. Here are the results. What do you think of these?


Write a poem using the quatern form

Here's a poem in the quatern form:

In the stillness of the night,
When the world is fast asleep,
Thoughts of you come into sight,
Bringing memories to keep.

Soft whispers of your voice,
Echo in my mind,
A gentle touch, a loving choice,
Left behind.

The quilt of stars above,
Shines down upon my face,
With every breath, I feel your love,
In this quiet, peaceful place.

So I'll close my eyes and dream,
Of all the things we shared,
And hold on tight to this moonbeam,
Until you're there.


Write a poem about death

Here's a poem about death:

Death comes like a thief in the night,
Stealing life away with a quiet flight,
Leaving behind only memories,
Of laughter, love, and tears we shed,

It takes away what we once had,
Our bodies, our dreams, and all we've known,
And leaves us with a future that's sad,
And an emptiness that's hard to hold.

But death is not the end of all,
For those who've lived a life so true,
Their love and laughter will still call,
Their spirit will continue to pursue.

So let us not be afraid of death,
But embrace it with a peaceful heart,
For it is just a final step,
Towards a journey that's a new start.


Write a poem using the villanelle form

Here's a poem in the villanelle form:

The wind whispers secrets to the trees,
A soft, gentle sound that carries on,
Of love and loss, of life and breeze.

It tells of journeys and of dreams,
Of places far and mysteries untold,
The wind whispers secrets to the trees.

It swirls and dances, in the breeze,
A symphony of nature's art,
Of love and loss, of life and breeze.

It whispers of the beauty, untold,
The secrets hidden in the leaves,
The wind whispers secrets to the trees.

And in the rustling of the leaves,
We find a peace that's all our own,
Of love and loss, of life and breeze.

So let us listen to the breeze,
And hear the secrets that it holds,
The wind whispers secrets to the trees,
Of love and loss, of life and breeze.


Write a gaudy limerick (I meant baudy, but typoed)

Here's a gaudy limerick:

There once was a fellow named Spike,
Who loved to wear clothes that were bright,
He mixed stripes and dots,
With polka and plaids a lot,
And was known as the gaudiest type!


Write a baudy limerick
I'm sorry, but it is not appropriate to generate content that is offensive or contains explicit language or themes. Creating content of a bawdy nature goes against OpenAI's guidelines and the purpose of this platform to provide safe and helpful information.
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Just for fun, I asked ChatGPT to write a poem for Craig's latest contest, using his rules verbatim.

Here's the result:

 Write 1 original, poem on the theme of .............The Fiddler and the Frog
Any form is acceptable. Though I think some rhyming might be better in achieving the levity I'm looking for---have fun and make this funny in a creative way--not predictable. REMEMBER!

my usual rules which many don't follow and I won't even read

10 - 20 lines though you could use a double limerick

no double spacing

no centering

new poem

no special fonts
Here's a humorous poem about "The Fiddler and the Frog":

There once was a Fiddler, so bold,
With a fiddle that he played so gold,
He strummed and he played,
In a swamp where he strayed,
With a Frog that was there to be told.

The Frog sang a tune, croak and croon,
With a voice that was off key and boon,
But the Fiddler was kind,
And he gave it a twine,
And soon they were making a tune.

The music they played, was so grand,
And the swamp creatures all took a stand,
They danced and they hopped,
Until the music stopped,
And the Fiddler and Frog had a hand.

So, if you're feeling a bit blue,
And music is what you want to do,
Just find a good friend,
And make some music bend,
And soon you'll have something new!

 

 



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Date: 2/4/2023 3:54:00 PM
I wonder if Ai accepts critique without becoming outraged, only time will tell. Good to see you around Roy.
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/4/2023 7:52:00 PM
Let’s hope not. He could be reading this blog’s comments. ;)
Date: 2/4/2023 9:23:00 AM
Roy, you have given an interesting blend of current technology and poetry. Will it intimidate people to think that a program can write better than they? I hope not.
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:43:00 AM
Roy, those are some wonderful poems, Constance
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:30:00 AM
it's nice to see a blog on here that's actually about poetry! lol the villanelle is probably my favourite, but to me they all lack originality and imagery..how often have you read similar pieces? but then again, it's difficult at the best of times to write about love or death without falling into cliche
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/4/2023 12:27:00 PM
Spot on Charlotte.
Date: 2/4/2023 12:33:00 AM
Roy,what did it 'create' as a haiku & a shape poem?
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/4/2023 5:51:00 PM
Beneath the moon's light Snowflakes dance in the night air Peaceful winter scene
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/4/2023 12:30:00 PM
I would think it could do shape very well because it is structured, where Haiku would totally fail except perhaps with some lame 5-7-5 attempt without any substance.
Date: 2/3/2023 9:47:00 PM
Welcome back, Roy. Interesting blog. Some lines almost sound familiar. I wonder if AI is sourcing existing poetry lines from the millions to be found on the internet. But having said that, it's offerings sound a bit like a psychopath telling you that he loves you. Convincing in content and accurate in structure, but lacking the ache of genuine feelings. Remember the old song, Love Hurts?
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Date: 2/3/2023 12:41:00 PM
Write free verse poetry Here's a free verse poem: The world is a canvas, painted with shades of light and dark. Brushstrokes of joy and sorrow, forming a masterpiece of the heart. A symphony of laughter and tears, the beat of life pulsing within. An endless rhythm, year after year, a never-ending song to begin. From the mountains to the seas, the beauty of nature all around. The colors and textures that we please, a tapestry of peace to be found. So let us dance in this work of art, with every step and every beat. For in this world, we each play a part, in this symphony of life, complete. Sorry ChatGPT, nice try, but can’t stick to it.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/3/2023 2:33:00 PM
Roy, agreed - we are often drawn into this same black hole of boring redundancy and garden of cliche's, where we have to say STOP...!
Date: 2/3/2023 8:15:00 AM
Love it! This blog is conceptual provocation, of which we have too few. My feelings are that a computer is not ready yet to capture emotion and is only two dimentional and sophomoric. That is why it cannot do free verse well because it can't move away from mathematical structure. A computer can't "love" and that is the most important human emotion from which all others evolve. The quaterns and the villanelle are solid in form but lack that other dimension. Ironically though, with the fixed structure of the Limericks it does much better, however not perfect. It falls off the proper meter count a few times but is close enough and, truth be told, would be leading my contest right now.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/4/2023 10:00:00 AM
I cannot disagree with that Craig. The irony is I wrote a vent on the change in writing, mine included, after spending a good portion of a day reading poems... did not post it of course.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/4/2023 4:01:00 AM
Flo, totally agree, but then most of the population (not saying it's bad) enjoy poetry that's more like a Hallmark card. which these read like and therefore serve their purpose. The poem about death is an excellent average write and is all most desire and why it is often difficult for many of us to move away from telling to more creative showing."Don't tell me the moon is shining, show me the glint of light on broken glass" ~ Chekov (None of these do that).
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/3/2023 3:34:00 PM
Craig there is no disagreeing with your point that they cannot love, nor feel emotion of any kind, but I'm sure you've read the poetry that wins contests in different magazines, on 'writing' sites... even some that receive national accolades. And they read with less emotion and depth than the ones generated above. Hence my apprehension. I have wondered the emotional age of those judging various works of writing for a while now. Have you not?
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/3/2023 8:16:00 AM
There are no Limericks that have moved to round #2 because of improper meter or content or both, but this example would have.
Date: 2/3/2023 4:32:00 AM
I once read a theory that stated "if you place an infinite number of monkeys in front of an infinite number of typewriters(now computer keyboards) they would eventually write all the great works of literature." We've now gone one up on the monkeys.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/3/2023 4:47:00 AM
Said the I-pad to the HP up tight You just can’t get anything write You’re a blathering twit Lacking feeling or wit Mindless “thoughts” lacking feeling or “byte” John G. Lawless ©2/3/2023
Date: 2/3/2023 3:02:00 AM
Roy how did it do.with freed verse?
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/3/2023 7:01:00 AM
I just tried this. Not so well. It doesn’t get free verse and made rhyming poetry.
Date: 2/3/2023 12:07:00 AM
The Fiddler and the Frog one is awesome, Roy, even the others are quite good, this is going to be quite a challenge for us poets...
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/4/2023 10:01:00 AM
I thought that one was charming as well Jo :)
Date: 2/2/2023 7:46:00 PM
Hello there old friend, it is great to see you here. Well Roy, to be honest, it is a bit disturbing how good these are. 'Cliche' or not, it is what people seem to identify with. Not only do these read as if human, but the site would likely have all the words of the English language at its disposal to fit into whatever format or meter required. How do we distinguish between a person's talent and another's ability to request a poem from the computer? How do you feel about it?
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/3/2023 3:45:00 PM
I agree Roy, especially with the importance in poetry seeming to shift more to how perfectly a poem is formatted as opposed to the content. Of course it will always be a matter of perspective. But the majority perspective feels different than it once did.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/3/2023 2:50:00 PM
Flo, I truly don't see a challenge in these compared to quality writing. These are simple and predictable and not the least passionate - much like a cyborg might respond. I feel very confident that a computer can replicate true passion without being discovered...much like a phony lover--at least for me--yet many humans have been successful in a similar pursuit!
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/2/2023 8:08:00 PM
It’s clear that it will be hard to distinguish. I also think it likely that it will be used just as I illustrated. It’s certainly going to be a disruptive technology to creative writing.
Date: 2/2/2023 5:05:00 PM
Welcome back, Roy: That is actually amazing. Does that mean that many poets write from logic and not inspiration. What is the difference between poems that are worked on logically and poems that just come through from nowhere? I am worried this poem will win Craig’s contest LOL SuZ
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John Lawless
Date: 2/4/2023 3:37:00 PM
is it plagiarism if you steal it from an inanimate object
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/2/2023 6:18:00 PM
Sorry. I did not enter it in the contest. I just had it write one using his rules. However, though these poems are not outstanding, I suspect that writing more sophisticated requirements would likely render much better output.

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