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Pickett Tupp and Poteeta Whey

I have a superhero; his name is Pickett Tupp. Before you count to zero, he'll have picked it up. Grandpa could have hurt his neck but Pickett, super guy, picked the peel up from the deck where Junior let it lie. I've another super friend; her name's Poteeta Whey. If it's out, you can depend it's rightly put away. When some kids can't find their stuff they're like a mental case. But she'll find it, sure enough, because it's in its place. From New Year's to December, you'll always make Mom's day, if you will just remember Pickett Tupp and Poteeta Whey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/12/2014 4:52:00 AM
lovely heroic quatrains for children, Roy. Congrats.
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Date: 10/9/2014 8:37:00 PM
I love it Roy. Poteeta Whey, Picket Tupp Brilliant. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations Roy to your 1st place placement. Enjoyed the tale... Verlena
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Date: 10/9/2014 1:15:00 PM
such a clever write Roy would be a great poem to have in the school corridors:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:59:00 PM
This would be great in a children's book of poetry. I liked it. Happy writing and thank you for your help with my poetry. God bless you.
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:51:00 PM
this is ADORABLE!!!!
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:34:00 PM
I've always thought that a good way to gauge a persons character is knowing how many, if any, and also who, that person admires Roy. And its a strange thing in life to not be able to consider oneself as being a Hero. Thanks for the stimulating poem. J.A.B.
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