A Voice In the Wind

Far above a timbered valley -- High up on a mountain peak -- The beauty of the day surrounds me As I listen to the breezes speak. Serenity caresses my soul -- Gentle winds tune each leaf they touch -- Until a symphony is heard By senses not attuned to such. I question the source of this artistry. And, as resonant chords the winds pursue, Lyric breezes sing their songs And flood my mind with thoughts of you. So, I listen for a voice in the wind -- As I wait for your spirit to pass by. When I reach for a hand meant for me The spell is broken by a sigh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hays Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 2:19 PM
I see what you meant by how our poems seem to connect in the way they're written. My main focus when I write is to go straight from my head and then judge the result
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March 31, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Beautiful imagery, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Jerden Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 7:33 AM
I think this might be the first of your I have read, John. Every syllable sings! The rhythm is excellent and the length is perfect - long enough to set up the theme, develop the thought, and end just right. Going in my fav's! Congratulations!
Posey Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 10:03 AM
I appreciate your inspiring comments. I will be visiting soon....Thanks, my friend.... Jake
Gasun Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 6:13 AM
This is also a great masterpiece and I so much enjoyed reading it! Big big congratulations on your super win too my dear friend, John! You're such a great poet with amazing talent as well. Thanks for sharing your piece and again, for your inspiring comments! love and hugs, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 1:07 AM
this is wonderful, and serene. Congrats on your win in Anything goes contest.
Posey Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 5:16 AM
This was written some time ago on vacation in the Smoky Mountains. I've kept it close knowing it would be an award winner some day.... Thanks for the kudos..... Jake
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March 29, 2013 at 8:30 PM
John, Congratulations with your "Any Poem Goes" in my contest. It was an honor in hosting this contest once again. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Goodnight*Always*LINDA
Posey Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, dearest Linda. A win in your contest is a pure joy for me. I've always thought this one was a sleeper. It is as close to a classic as I will ever come..... Love ya .... Jake
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November 5, 2012 at 6:17 AM
It sounds like a mountain to here in British Columbia. You did a great job of capturing the experience.
May Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 6:07 AM
nice write.....enjoyed
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