Ragnarok: the Storm

With the end of days upon them
Nears the time of final battle
In the halls of high Valhalla
Asgard senses its death rattle

In the forest crows the rooster 
In the sky the sun does darken
In the cave the hound is howling
To these signs the Aesir harken

Heimdall blows the Gjallarhorn
Dark the rainbow bridge is turning
Vivid lightning cleaves Yggdrasil
Then the central tree is burning

Aesir watch in fascination
See volcanoes spew like fountains
See the heavens splitting open
See the oceans climb the mountains

See the continents convulsing
See the forests burn to ashes
See the sons of Mim awaken
In the fatal lightning flashes

As the winds consume the wasteland
From the south Surtr advances
With his minions tearing corpses
Bright his sword and sharp his lances

Aesir then prepare their weapons
Eyes are clear and arms are steady
The Midgard serpent Jörmungandr
Upon the battle plain is ready

With his heavy hammer Mjolnir
Strides the mighty god of thunder
To do battle with the serpent
And to rend the world asunder

June 30, 2014

N.B. This poem is an Epyllion, a brief narrative poem with a romantic or mythological theme. It is written in trochaic tetrameter, like some of the ancient Eddas.


Glossary:
Ragnarök - Final battle and death of the Aesir
Aesir - The Norse gods
Asgard - one of the Nine Worlds and home of the Aesir
Valhalla - a majestic, enormous hall located in Asgard, ruled over by the chief Norse god Odin
Heimdall - A Norse god who blows his horn to signal the beginning of Ragnarök
Gjallarhorn - Heimdall's horn
Midgard- Middle Earth, or the world of humans
Bifröst - the burning rainbow bridge between Midgard and Asgard
Yggdrasil - The sacred Norse central tree that holds the Nine Worlds
Mim - an Asian renowned for his knowledge and wisdom who has been beheaded. Odin carries around Mím's preserved head and it recites secret knowledge and counsel to him.
Surtr- a fire troll with a flaming sword who sets the world on fire.
Jörmungandr- The world serpent or ouroboros that surrounds the earth and grasps his own tail. When he lets go, the world will end. Jörmungandr's arch-enemy is the god Thor.
Thor - The Norse god of thunder
Mjolnir  - Thor's hammer and principal weapon
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Crevan Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Wow! It's so ASTOUNDING!!! I feel like i'm reading again 'Magnus Chase' my favorite book!!!
Lindley Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:01 AM
This is easily a true gem my friend! This creation awes me and is about one of my favorite subjects. Adding this gem to my fav list and pm on the way too. Super 7 from me.
Fleming Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Excellent poem, Roy!! Some fine lines. :) john.
Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Incredible poem Roy, and the learnings the reader gets is fantastic. It's no wonder it won, great job, James.....
Rivenbark Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 2:31 PM
As an Asatruar I commend you on a fantastic job with the lore :D Congratulations
Eastman Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 9:23 AM
A tremendously researched poem and well written... Congratulations on a fine win.
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on top win with such an outstanding write, Roy!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:39 PM
the glory of myth so well highlighted by your immense piece... marvelously written.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Oh my what an amazing write Roy ! Beyond my imagination ,,was really tough for me to understand ,,, but the footnote all the more wonderful ,, congrats on first place win ! Must hv been easy for the judge !
Eastman Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Bravo! You've done it again! Great write! And showed that you know your Norse mythology.... Congrates on such a great win!
Maharaj Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 4:20 AM
love it.. Congrats on your well deserved win... Brilliant in an understatement... shivers down my spine as i read each line...
Kimathi Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 2:27 AM
A very captivating write you Roy! I also find it unique the way you have put a glossary! Congrats to you!!!! :-)
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 12:10 AM
I wrote a poem for this contest but I was too late to get it included since I was having computer trouble. This is a great write and your win was well earned. Big congratulations. Love, Joyce
Ryerson Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Brilliant write Roy...A well deserved win! I live in hurricane country and have been through a few and I could KICK myself (ouch!) for not coming up with anything...
Sergi Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Hi Roy: Thanks for the comment on my poem. I was very impressed with the words and meter you used to write such an epic poem and I can only say, "Congratulazioni, il numero uno!"
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Well, this is a storm on information written in a compelling form. Congrats on a top win. // paul
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:06 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Chutani Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Roy, hearty congratulations for the top fabulous win. It will take me few more readings to understand the norse god concepts. this could be your entry for the new contest by Shadow on the theme of norse people and their gods also. Mohan
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 8:09 PM
WOWOOWW!!! what an informative storm poem. :) CONGRATULATIONS.. :D I ESPECIALLY LIKE 2, 3 AND 4TH STANZAS.. :)
Sietesantos Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 7:35 PM
Hi Roy, I am back again to congratulate you on a well-deserved TOP win! Well-deserved, my friend!
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 7:35 PM
Wow how specific, even not knowing the words in everyday vocabulary you have created a wonderful and flowing story. great winner :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:43 PM
wow, you went all out with this one, Roy. Making it mythological and double meaning of storms. I really wanted to enter this contest but it filled too fast. I had already written three storm poems and didn't know if we could use older ones. Anyway, BIG congrats. I saw you took first place with this one.
United Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:24 PM
So much attention to detail Roy a worthy first place winner. Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Roy your poem shone out the attention to detail and the research you obviously did was excellent. A most deserved win congrats on 1st place hugs
Sietesantos Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Roy, I love your take on the theme - and interestingly, we both referred to Thor! I guess we both saw where he was definitely applicable in our own unique way! Bravo! Kindest regards.
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