Message of the Moth

Enticed to the light on the top porch, you hover...
Moon child of the night, do you look for a lover?

Oh little moth, it's you and I alone,
each bound for a troth of our acquaintance unknown.

Must I be a wife to one not of my choosing,
a servant for life only fit for amusing?

Oh, moth of the moon is it a message you bear,
a sign opportune to the plea in my prayer?

I see open sky through the room’s gaping window...
If I could just fly, I would lift wings and go!

November 5, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/13/2014 9:06:00 PM
Simply magnificent, my poetic friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 11/19/2014 3:23:00 AM
An enchanting piece you have there Roy! My mind sailed to the sky after reading this piece! :-)
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:54:00 PM
I love how you wrote from a woman's perspective...wonderfully creative. Congrats on your win, Roy!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/18/2014 12:00:00 PM
so so creative Roy really enjoyed this write - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2014 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this poem I was sure would be a winner. Thank you for your kind remarks about my poem, but it didn't cut the mustard.
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Date: 11/17/2014 8:15:00 PM
This is an incredibly creative take on the challenge. Just Brilliantly written. I am reading so many really great poems this evening. I have faved more poems tonight then I have in quite a while. This too has to be added to my favs. Congratulations on your well desrved win.
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Date: 11/12/2014 9:12:00 PM
The message is clear in your wonderful entry Roy. Written with a woman's perspective. It is one of having the freedom of choice and not being abliged to be united to one that feels a sense of possession, stuck in an abusive loveless union. This is sure to be on the winner's list!
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Date: 11/14/2014 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Connie! I saw your great entry and I guess they are both about freedom, in different ways. An open window is a metaphor for freedom. In mine, there's an old superstition that seeing a moth means that a letter or message is coming, the bigger the moth, the more important. The Luna moth is huge!
Date: 11/6/2014 7:57:00 PM
tremendous visuals and lyrical images here, roy.. I feel like fluttering!.. belated thanks for my placement in your contest.. I'm in a jet-lag mode right now.. huggs!
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:34:00 PM
The Lunar Moth is such a beautiful moth..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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