Ancient Dance

In twilight, old songs you're softly humming.
Languorous smiles silken your lovely face,
beguiling my presence still, becoming
in all your ways, a gift of heaven's grace.

Deep your eyes, beheld above the stillness
of mystic mien, dismissing every voice.
Caresses known in sadness and in illness,
a bounty cherished, if you make the choice.

Alluringly, you draw the bedroom curtain
and move in softest song of violins.
Of languid looks and outcome certain,
as old as Eve, the ancient dance begins.

Sway, your heated honey scent of passion
and poise, anticipating kiss conceived,
shall return my longing, in your fashion
and make my life ten times a joy perceived.

My love grows great to see your form advance
and weave with siren song the ancient dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Roy, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs --- LINDA ---
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Amazing best loved poem landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
Terry Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Congrats. Beautiful love poem. Reminds me, somewhat, of Romeo's passion for Juliet.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Roy.
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Hello, Roy, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:16 PM
a sonnet that beguiles the senses so tastefully done superb Roy hugs 7
Lindley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Brilliant poem my friend. Big congrats on your win!!A7
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Roy! I hv missed reading ur poetry for quite sometime!
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 8:34 PM
ROY. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Roya, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Congrats..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Wow Roy, this is a number one for me! Your last stanza befor the ending couplet is so complete it could stand alone as a poem. I was transfixed! 7+
A  Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Roy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Hosty Totsy Win :-) ~SKAT~
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations Roy..Love & Regards
De La Luna Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 3:54 AM
enjoyed this dance with words, RoY! superbly written! Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. 7 Beautiful well said Blessings
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 2:35 PM
A gentlemanly verse of love, well thought out and executed. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Nunez Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations! :D Kim Patrice
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 10:41 AM
wow Roy I love the passionate imagery here - lovely flow to the poem - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Just found this great write my friend. Adding this to my fav list as it strikes a special place in my heart. Without a doubt a gem that gets a solid 7 rating..
A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Hello Roy, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:31 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, Roy
Puddifoot Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 6:17 PM
this was one of two lovely sonnets that just had to place in my top three! such beauty and romance conveyed through these lines - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Jerden Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Thanks, Charlotte. I don't wander too often into the romantic category of poetry, so it's a real satisfaction to see that I can play with the big boys and girls.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 3:47 PM
I just love how this flows. I noticed a comment you made to someone at a blog I think. And I so agree with you about sonnets being impossible to write the "Modern" way. It's just free verse inside 14 lines, if you ask me. thanks for my win in your contest. That was an honor to me that you liked it. This sonnet is a romantic gem.
Jerden Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 4:43 PM
I think this one reflects a turn in my style as well. Thanks for the kind remarks!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:28 PM
A romantic rendezvous for the poetic soul dwelling in all our hearts. Just Beautiful!
Jerden Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
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