Pearl Diving

Breathe laden islands rise and fall beneath the lap
of crystalline water, a steam graced surface breached, 
rosettes crest, their gently risings peaks to cap
mouthfuls of desire whose lower gate's lie unbreached.

Submerged beneath chest's hollow lies a navel fine
the round perfection of its form longs, for pointed tongue.
A sweeter base can't be found 'bove the water line
yet, men would gladly drown to go below hips clung.

Below, down deep, nectar bathes the pristine pearl,
and petals, rose-red gently part in delight.
The heat, the steam the bath, and the lovely girl
perhaps, perhaps, he thinks, we'll make of this a night.
 


Date: 3/6/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Well done Debbie, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
Ober Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Wow, Debbie! A well-deserved 1st place win indeed! Thanks for your comment on my poem for your Metamorph contest - To answer your question, yes, it was a lot of fun! I love your contests - They're always original and challenging :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Richard saying he is a man of the "sea" down here. Funny!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:56 PM
HOT poem, Debs. WEll done, and congrats.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 4:14 AM
Congratulations o this Debbie loved it when i first read it and still do xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 11:14 PM
Ooh la la, very sensual piece. I myself am a man of the sea. You are oh so talented.
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Debbie this is a gem. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Harper Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, very lovely place and poem
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:28 PM
A NICE ONE...DG... ALWAYS..PD
Jones Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on this amazing beauty...Debbie...could you consider part 2?.....
Jerden Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 2:27 PM
When I first read this, I knew it would take 1st place! Congratulations, Debbie!
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Only you could write a sexy, sensual, and erotic poem.......and make it so beautifully innocent and pure...lovely lovely!!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Great images and metaphorical. A great write for the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jerden Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Superb Debbie! What metaphors in pearly pristine waters lie! Going in my favorites.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:26 AM
This is hot oh cool one , naughty but nice xx
Horsman Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 4:22 PM
wow ever so visual, wish i was there, love this...
Williams Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Debbie a wonderful image and I love the metaphors...David
Macmillan Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Gorgeous! Ummm... I just sent a soup mail, but I think it's okay? Something strange is going on... odd odd odd... xox Dee
Poet Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Beautiful imagery!!!
Fisher Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:00 PM
Such a beautiful story...very enjoyable
Shines Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 10:37 PM
nice write.
Komala Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:16 PM
so lovely sweet angel Debbie :) always enjoyed your great write :) luv and hugs :) SK
Irwin Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Love it!
Sivey Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:36 PM
This is quite beautiful my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, quite the special poem, Great Work!!
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