Notes About The Poem

The Angel Inside

Coral life forms in copious swarms
feast in the Cambrian chyme,
dividing their cells and forming their shells
to end on the seafloor as lime.
Tectonic churning and magma upturning
renders marble whiter than bone.
The marble is mined, but the cutters are blind
to the angel confined in the stone.

A young sculptor arose, with a bend in his nose
and a transcendent creative spark,
charged with ambition to fulfill a commission,
an angel for St. Dominic's Ark.
An artist sublime who will live for all time,
his genius is to see things not shown.
For an angel to achieve he first has to perceive
its splendor enclosed in the stone.

At dawning's first glow he surveys the tableau
of the blocks the stone cutters supplied.
In some he sees dreams of potential themes,
but only one holds an angel inside.
“A beautiful thing never gives so much pain 
as does failing to hear it and see it.”
The block that he chose was rejected by those
who then lied and claimed to foresee it.
 
With talent and skill he falls to with a will,
surrounded by rubble and relic.
His method you see, for the angel to free
is to remove all the bits not angelic.
Michelangelo’s art for all time stands apart
but there's something further to heed.
For there's a bit more to the fine metaphor
in the tale of the angel he freed.

“A beautiful thing never gives so much pain 
as does failing to hear it and see it.”
For in all our insides a bright angel abides
and is just waiting for something to free it:
to remove all the parts which harden our hearts,
to chip out the darkness and pride,
to smooth the rough patches, to polish the scratches
and unshackle the angel inside.

© January 26, 2013
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Rider Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:37 PM
One of the best metaphoric poems I have read in a long while! Your lines and rhymes are wonderful and the last verse made me well up. Wonderfully done! ~Tru
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Hello Roy, I have just read your poem. It is a great write. Enjoyed your poem. have a nice day my friend.
Eastman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:43 AM
You never disappoint! BRAVO! Congrats on the win.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Roy ! Amazing pen!
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:27 PM
ROY, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:01 PM
WOW Roy I am simply blown away with the imagery and flow of the poem - can see why you chose this one for the contest - my congrats:-) hugs Jan a 7 from em
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:01 PM
incredible and exquisite pen Roy congrats on placing hugs
Smith Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Ahh yes! The sculpters chisel, painters brush and the poets pen... You seem to set an angel free with each stroke of pen, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 1:32 PM
This is simply perfection....you freed the poem in your mind in such an amazing way....Enthralling...To remove all bits not angelic...My fav stanza. wow. If we could do the same...
Phillips Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 12:13 PM
"To remove all the parts which harden our hearts And chip out the darkness and pride To smooth the rough patches and polish the scratches And unshackle the angel inside". There is always a good side to everyone only if we try to recognize it. I like the metaphorical contrast used in this piece. The angel side in comparison to beauty.The angel inside is sometimes hard to recognize and others must search hard to recognize. A very beautiful poem.
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 3:44 AM
This is amazing, favorite'd
De Burca Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Fantastic, congrats on your win. Outstanding.
A  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:38 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
Jones Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Roy...your very best.....my favorite....congratulations
Eastman Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 4:03 PM
BRAVO!... TREMENDOUS poem. Equally excellent win... Congratulations on such a beautiful and winning poem! It'll be one of my favorites.
Mundine Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 12:52 PM
A most deserving win. This poem is a near masterpiece. Congratulations.
Devnath  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 6:19 AM
Big congrats on your superb win. The last line is so nicely depicted the essence of the whole. Loved always, bl
Bono Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:58 PM
well deserved 1st place.nice flow and rhyme.take care
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations with your winning word play poem Roy... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
Sister Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 1:20 PM
This is one of the mot beautiful things I've read on here. Beautiful flow, rhyme and meter. I can only wish. Thank you. J
Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Thank you for this impressive and inspiring write. Very well penned. Many congrats to you on your giant win. AO
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 2:31 PM
The physicality of your words passes great feelings as Michelangelo's sculpture. Mastery at its best Roy. 'As is painting, so is poetry'. Bravo for your grand wind. Well deserved Roy. This poem is an inspiration to all at PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Perfect rhythm and meter with great internal rhyme in the first and third lines of each verse...Love it and congrats - Tim
Richards Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Oh wow........I do love this so much. This one is a stand out in word choice!! Very deserving, Roy!
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