Obstacle Poems | Examples

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Inner Ascent

I want to dive deep into my soul,
to search for answers profound and unspoken,
answers that stir awakening within,
that unsettle complacency and breathe
new life
into the quiet chambers of my being.

I yearn to travel beyond familiar horizons,
to embrace new ways of thinking,
to unlearn what no longer serves
and relearn the courage to see differently.

Each obstacle blocking my growth
becomes a threshold to cross,
each fear a lesson demanding honesty.
I press forward—sometimes faltering,
yet resolute—toward a higher calling,
where becoming matters more than arriving,
and the journey itself reshapes my soul.

Failure Speaks

Failure Speaks


Hey, you! I'm Failure,
The shadow that looms near,
The ogre that haunts your dreams,
The weight that clips your wings.

But know me as the miles you must roam,
The obstacles you must overcome,
The falls that test your will,
For the eagle in you to soar still.

Endurance

Ahead a trail that stretches with his finish line unseen,
at the start he ponders what this one will mean,
this obstacle will be like no other he thought,
an obstacle different than everything he's fought,
cool crisp morning air fills his lung,
pistol raises, the starting chime has rung,
months of discipline has lead him here,
even the thought of loss isnt severe,
content the journey was the path to the start,
this trail, this obstacle will be the final part,
cloud of orange dust left at the beginning,
a pack of runners begins thinning,
weaving through Utah's canyon,
traverse to reveal the true champion,
his stride and breathing has reached the maximus,
by endurance we conquer - Fortitudine Vincimus,
ahead the finish line still unseen,
but now he knows what this will all mean.

For my good friend Matt, Ultra marathon runner. May you let no obstacles get in way of your mission!


the obstacle

The obstacle 

After the none violent revolution in Portugal
1972, as often happens in my life when something
unusual happens, I was there, not knowing I was
witnessing history
My ship came to unload cargo, but we ended
up staying for weeks, a revolution is too important
to be wasted by mere cargo
In the village where I later settled.
 the new era brought a road, not a big road
 but wide enough for a school bus
there was an aber, where the road ended
two olive trees blocked the road for further
expansion
The trees belonged to an old man who refused
to sell his trees to the camera
With the dictatorship over and a new democracy
with rights and freedom for everyone
The school bus had to drive onto a field to get past
That lasted until the old man died
and his relatives allowed for the olive trees 
to be removed, with roots and replanted in
someone's garden.

Obstacle

My family never allows me to read a book 
Every time I attempt to read a page they'll tell me to cook
So day and night  I sweat
But bitterness wipes of the wet 
Triumphantly it makes me do all the work

Living For a Crown

A face with the bitterest frown,
For long years expecting a crown;
Now in prickly sweat bathed
And A Tongue is scathed …

It’s really an awful spectacle,
Facing no challenge, no obstacle,
As reported by his mirror
Doing so without error;
Ability he’s got and Agility
And all his life no infirmity.

So, why is he, Chief Favor
Facing Monarchical Disfavor;
For long years living for a crown
And it’s public knowledge in a far-off town?


Spreading Tentacles In the Face of Obstacles

He is out to spread his tentacles
In the face, of combative obstacles,
And dying to end through a tackle
Any unacceptable spectacle 
Between The Rickety and The Ramshackle:
Busy roads he’d started their channels,
Hateful robbers sealing off their tunnels,
Corrupt judges replacing with panels,
Supported subsidy showing with funnels,
Filling stations without towels obliging flannels
Bottled water for user of runnels
His love for dogs at their kennels...

Determinedly spreading his tentacles,
All the wrongly jailed breaking their shackles!

Premium Member The Obstacle Is the Path

forward
                                          watch your step
                             the shadows will hide deep cracks
                                if you should fall get back up
                      the path will guide so never give up my friend
                                     at times you may walk
                                        you may even run
                               crawling will never be shunned
                                  if the path becomes hidden 
                                           you may stray
                              just look up and find your guide
                       there are many obstacles and many paths
                               stay the course and do the math

                                       January 23rd, 2021
                                Suzette Prime Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsor: Emile Pinet

An Obstacle To Large To Mention

Here I am again buried under by this grain of sand
At the beach oceans mock me.  Waves laugh real tears
Pretty bikini girls wearing two strings saunter by 
All smiles as they admire my bulky hunk muscles 
As I hide my grief from them and open seas
The speck of sand won’t move an inch from me
I refuse to look.  It occupies my tummy in defiance
In disguise, near the navel, with all its crushing weight
Holds my belly button hostage.  Maybe it has needs
Money?  Prestige?   A beach?  Power?  Yes!  Power!
If only a small slight breeze would happen by
Something on the order of a category five perhaps
Two hurricanes and a Tsunami might do 
Particle removal is not as easy as it looks
An obstacle, an intruder of this magnitude
Must be kept quiet because people would talk
If only I had a gun, a sandwich or baloney
I could ask it to leave!  But that would be silly
Sand can’t speak and a speck even less

Fog- An Obstacle

fog as the white ghost 
escorts the airship wrongly
brings a pathless wreck



-January 01, 2018 Chattogram

Every Obstacle Away

Every Obstacle Away


Like a bird that sails over everything on earth
Without even a dram of worry in its heart,
If you try to live that way
You will certainly get every obstacle away.....

Find, in yourself, your capabilities
Be confident and obtain your susceptibilities,
Like a king who is known for his sceptred sway
Imitate him and you will get every obstacle away.....

Be optimistic but be content
Forge your future in every silent moment,
Like valorous lion hunting  it's prey
Follow it and you will get every obstacle away.....

Obstacle Course

M-ist, fog, and haze 
A-re nowhere in sight; 
R-ise of the morning sun 
I-s setting things aright. 
C-oal clouds twelfth February 
A-re all becoming white; 
R-ed beacon sweet Sunday is truly burning bright.

D-awn has just come out, 
A-fter the lonely twilight; 
N-ew day denies the dark, 
T-rying to break with all its might. 
I-n the world of survival, you must win over the foe's force; 
C-liffs and tires are conquered in your obstacle course.

The Obstacle

I was brought her under the false impression that this was one big adventure
I listened to my intuition (hopelessly wrong)
I was confident and excited and young
but time can change people
Now I feel older than the trees in Century Park
trapped in a concrete jungle
despairing, hopeless, but alive; 
my confidence withered like the cacti on my balcony
hot, stuffy days learning nothing at a desk and
endless nights praying for a miracle to happen
Of course meeting you made this worse
but it was fun while it lasted
childish illusions all fade away eventually anyway
and even if I am taller than the buildings next to the flat I live in
taller, even, than the Pearl Tower
I will always be living in the shadow of someone else taller 
I really shouldn't expect much from this life
but at least I can stick up two long fingers at her in the dark
but at least I can still exist
even as an obstacle

Premium Member Obstacle In Our Path Elephants

“Obstacle In Our Path”
Elephants

Side to side
Side to side 
Rhythmically rocking my enormous body and head  
Side to side
Side to side
Like a pendulum my trunk swings side to side
I'm only doing this because I'm bored
~
My family and I walk for miles and miles
Foraging, 
Dusting,
Mud wallowing,
Swimming and socializing
~
We encounter an obstacle in our path
Humans have built a fence and block our path
Evidently they forgot that we never forget the path we always take?
~
I tense my enormous frame
Flare my ears and with a
Trump of rage 
I gather my herd   and together we work and push the fence down
To clear our path
~
Side to side
Side to side
We walk across and melt into the bush

©By: Eve Roper 8/28/2015



Contest Name: Giant animals 
Sponsor: Nathan D.

No Obstacle

Brushed timeless in youth's inner light, dreams flow
like ruffles on dress stitched blue - 
no fence long legs can't climb. 


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 2/15/15
For Nette's In Praise of A Kimo Contest
Visual #2

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