Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Kimo

No Obstacle

Brushed timeless in youth's inner light, dreams flow
like ruffles on dress stitched blue - 
no fence long legs can't climb. 


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 2/15/15
For Nette's In Praise of A Kimo Contest
Visual #2

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Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2015 at 11:39 PM If I were judging this contest, THIS one would be in my top three for SURE. Wow.

John Lawless February 16, 2015 at 5:31 PM Rhonda, this is a wonderful interpretation of the visual, loved the first line...WOW

Sandra Haight February 16, 2015 at 9:23 AM Nicely done, Rhonda! I like your poetic interpretation of this visual! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 16, 2015 at 9:33 AM still playing with the last line...I know Nette doesn't like filler words, but I can't get it to flow without them.

Monterey Sirak February 16, 2015 at 8:14 AM A perfect poem to go with the title and picture. There are no obstacles in youth.

Dorian Petersen Potter February 16, 2015 at 5:39 AM Fantastic pen Rhonda! I enjoyed you kimo, my dearest friend! A 7 from me! GL in the contest!I wish you a very nice day! In his light! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D"

Eileen Manassian February 15, 2015 at 10:11 PM :) Love the enjambment here. I'm not good at that. You make it FLOW! ;) Lovely, sweetie. Good luck in the contest....Dreams....one of my favorite themes to write on...Loved the analogy here.