No Obstacle

Brushed timeless in youth's inner light, dreams flow like ruffles on dress stitched blue - no fence long legs can't climb. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 2/15/15 For Nette's In Praise of A Kimo Contest Visual #2

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2015 11:39:00 PM

If I were judging this contest, THIS one would be in my top three for SURE. Wow.

John Lawless

Date: 2/16/2015 5:31:00 PM

Rhonda, this is a wonderful interpretation of the visual, loved the first line...WOW

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/16/2015 9:23:00 AM

Nicely done, Rhonda! I like your poetic interpretation of this visual! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/16/2015 9:33:00 AM

still playing with the last line...I know Nette doesn't like filler words, but I can't get it to flow without them.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/16/2015 8:14:00 AM

A perfect poem to go with the title and picture. There are no obstacles in youth.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/16/2015 5:39:00 AM

Fantastic pen Rhonda! I enjoyed you kimo, my dearest friend! A 7 from me! GL in the contest!I wish you a very nice day! In his light! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D"

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/15/2015 10:11:00 PM

:) Love the enjambment here. I'm not good at that. You make it FLOW! ;) Lovely, sweetie. Good luck in the contest....Dreams....one of my favorite themes to write on...Loved the analogy here.