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the obstacle is the path

forward watch your step the shadows will hide deep cracks if you should fall get back up the path will guide so never give up my friend at times you may walk you may even run crawling will never be shunned if the path becomes hidden you may stray just look up and find your guide there are many obstacles and many paths stay the course and do the math January 23rd, 2021 Suzette Prime Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 2/4/2021 3:43:00 PM
wise advice indeed Mark, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2021 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "there are many obstacles and many paths." Yes, so many obstacles/paths in each life. You took the the winning path on this one. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...................
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Sheriff Koplin
Date: 2/4/2021 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate your kind comment!
Date: 2/4/2021 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Mark! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. I was very strict, but your poem rose in the ranks and made the list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Sheriff Koplin
Date: 2/4/2021 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Emile, I appreciate your generous placement!
Date: 1/31/2021 7:35:00 AM
Hello Mark Kooplin, I like this so much it will be my fav. Do you follow this path? Just wondering. There is a message here for everyone. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/31/2021 3:55:00 PM
Helloit is good to try. Keep at it Mark, I am also truing to follow a path. So far so good. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Sheriff Koplin
Date: 1/31/2021 2:59:00 PM
I try, thanks Darlene!
Date: 1/23/2021 9:34:00 PM
...exactemaunt!....as holmes said, 'when all else has been eliminated...that which still occupies one is thee....path'.....stan sand
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Sheriff Koplin
Date: 1/24/2021 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Sand!