Rite Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Rite of Passage

Her serene beauty was unparalleled.
We could only watch in blessed awe.
With grace she morphed into a butterfly.
Gently she flew far beyond our realm.



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Mortal Rite

Wherever you roam, the shadow of death,
Keeps dancing upon the rhythm of your breath,
As and when the rhythm ceases its measure,
Your life dissolves into the black shadow of death.

You work day and night for some hollow delight,
You sacrifice your rest, consumed by restless nights,
Every fleeting moment poured into empty pleasure,
At the end of the day, you find yourself prey to decay's diet.

Histories and all the stories hum a hymn of glory,
For which every life became a black and white story,
All heroes got no chance to dance upon the songs,
Of their epic and immortal tales of glorious victory.

The souls are intoxicated by the drug of the maze of life,
A husband is dying to satisfy his beautiful wife,
All the wives are making efforts to control their husbands,
Childhood dissolving into oldness follows the mortal rite.

Premium Member Rite Of Spring

The stars lead
and I follow – Your
darkness deepens
and I wade in – Primal!
There are no charts for
such hazardous journey.  

Light and darkness
both omnipotent in their
own illustrious ways.  

Puppy enchantment
morphing to howling pack.  Following
the blood-lust scent.  Nature warns.  Heaven
cringes.  But it is a ruse they dissuade
both part and parcel 
of the insatiable "Rite Of Spring".


Premium Member Flitting Rite Of Moths -- JU


Bold atlas moths congregate 
Around  lily pools... then wait 
Until  stars' resplendent light ,
Awakens their flitting  rite.

And  winging through air- brushed haze
Each laced rafter all ablaze--
As peak twirlings gleam anew
Like pearled gauze of every hue!

1st place

Premium Member Rite

Smooth the day, 
seize that curled and tousled head
grease its creased and mottled entrance 
come all wailing to a waiting world,
slide from the arms of midwife night
attempt to keep the light 
as round and full as well remembered,
bend each hunkered cornered shadow
pull it hook and line
pierce the fish flesh bone
stretched and knotted twine about your fingers
skewer any little patch of dark that lingers on 
heavy in that morning scented room,
fling the curtained windows wide 
cast that latch aside and breathe, 
fill your foggy winter lungs with spring 
embrace the gasp and grab yourself
a newly minted season
bursting fresh with sweet unsullied air
this is not a moment, 
it’s a revelation 
just for you
and one you might not want to share

Premium Member Rite of Passage and Popcorn

Can a man be be both blessed and cursed,
by long memories of combs and curls..
and is there any true penance to be done 
believing anything could be worse? 

The girl of aubern riding fast past my porch
always laughing into the dusk-
still, smile
in spite of myself,   
remembering it just as it was. 
  
Popcorn smell wafting down the cinema hall,
and what's more, thank the lord!  
invited to sit with two college sorority girls 
replete with rice and loaded squirt guns
at the late night Rocky Horror Picture Show. 

Holding hands with the girl nextdoor,
Miss Dear to Heart and friend.
Return to that wonderous world of before-
ah, to be sixteen at Six Flags
again!

Just wish I could remember the names,  
that belong to all those laughing faces...
in fine pigtails and shining braces,
held now, and forever
in a heart's Hall of Fame.


Premium Member Passages Rite

First steps, a new world,
Tiny hands reach for the light,
Life's path has begun.

Small boys stand so tall,
Jockeying, testing strength,
Manhood's door ajar.

Whispers of the past,
Old skin sheds, new life unfolds,
Spirit takes its form.

Leaving the warm nest,
Owlet's eyes see the moonlight,
The wide world awaits.

The old view is gone,
Seeing the world with new eyes,
Choices shape my path.

Wisdom's gentle dawn,
Embracing the elder years,
A life fully lived.

Premium Member Dionysus Opens the Feast

In rare gustation dine we here tonight!
For you, my feast; for me, your pleasant sight!
And for them both, I raise my glass to cheer:
Let all that’s sober end before the year!
Let music, wine and wantonness prevail!
Let revelry erase the dry and stale!
And light your mortal youth that burns so strong,
For I, the God of Wine, who’s lived too long.
And when my followers stand - or rather, sprawl -
Across the landscape, shall the dreary fall!
And when my wine the final frown shall lift,
Then sprawled amidst the rest, I’ll share the gift!

Let wine make us wise, and feasting for all!
Till morning shall rise, or each of us fall!

Evil sobriety! It shall not last the night!
For I have found munitions, ample for the fight!

The vine divine, from whence the grapes of wine!
I tend its thirsts, and it doth water mine!

The beasties of the Earth and air,
I do invite to be my fare!

Premium Member The Rite of Passage

We shall all die 
One day. 
It is the way 
Of this Universe. 
We walk upon 
The dirt of life and death. 
We are but a speck 
Of Cosmic dust 
In comparison to the vastness 
Of Space.
Our little orb appears to be unique.
The stars overwhelm the night sky 
As I gaze 
Into its sparkling darkness, 
I can only wonder 
At its brilliance, 
And what could possibly
                                    lie beyond . . .

Premium Member Coming Of Age, The Rite



a tender voice recites, muse’s lyrics flow                                                                                                
non-believers have poisoned Earth Mother's waterways    
She unleashes winds blown hotter and dryer                     
perennial white blossoms swoon midst zephyrs 
dangle from sterling chaste trees
twisted maple bark echo braids sacred hair unscathed    
gold filters branches
thousand-year rooted Algonquin memories 
elders and granddaughters amble amongst crackling twigs 
streams pristine align to augur a promising path
within a bison pelt tepee awaits the knowledge keepers embrace
fire and smoke dense and opaque
evoking a bittersweet melancholy
broadleaves tremble breathe and sway
hymn chants of traditional wisdom expel 
severed is the braid as is the child from the woman
her nascent efflorescence 
transition is significant as we are wedded 
and bound to nature’s perennial sentient
let the path before us grow wider and brighter for future generations

Premium Member Ages Old Rite

the plump raindrops fall
glad blooms drink their age-old wine
sunrise colors soon


Group 4

Premium Member Rite of Passage

“The streams are in my veins”
                                   quote from the sponsor

Guided
Through the ages
Endowing the future
An heir aroused by sage wisdom
Ancestral blood pumps and streams through my veins
A pulsating rhythm from the heart
through life’s restless currents,
A destiny
Guided

Date: August 5, 2022
For: Let your muse be inspired ~ R form poetry contest
Sponsored by: Constance LaFrance
Form: Rictameter
Syllables verified on howmanysyllables.com
Placed 2nd in contest

Premium Member Rite of Passage

Rite of Passage

Ebon skin debutante
contemplating spring’s arrival,
counting blossom petals.

Premium Member Sunset Ritual

in graceful flight
they glide with ease
across a skyline
that’s doused with fire

a sacred rite
upon a breeze
sun sets divine
and wings soar higher



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2023

Submitted on March 17, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1091 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

The Last Rite

Bury the hurt
to get over the pain
As memory relines
with forgiveness again

Bury the past
for new light to break through
With darkness abandoned
—your spirit anew


(Las Vegas: January, 2022)

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