Diet-Rite

Spoiled soy burgers and marshmallow spam Find all the worms in the uncured ham Mustard stew a la mode pistachio-flavored tongue of toad Dandelion roots in stuffing of turkey makes digestion extra-perky Fancy diets? - Gain weight and kvetch Eat this stuff! Shed pounds ~ just retch

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2021 12:20:00 PM

I am sure that there is a soda pop somewhere called Diet-Rite. I hope they do not see this one!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/3/2021 3:18:00 PM

A perfect poem for Halloween; I am sure that this diet works.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/3/2021 10:39:00 AM

Hi Gershon almost three years ago now when we sold our family home, which had been in the family for 60 years, and we moved into a safe protected estate, I nearly had a nervous break down and cried for weeks We downsized everything we owned by at least, or probably more, than 50%, I lost 7 kilos, which I had been trying to do for years, I came right eventually, but now control what I eat, and have maintained the weight that I forever wanted. Drastic, but true! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/2/2021 5:13:00 PM

Hi Gershon, Loved the poem... I had a friend was on a diet one time. She would eat all the rich foods, high in calories, but of course she'd have her Diet Cola. When she gained weight, she'd always blame the Cola for her weight gain. Good Write ~ Debbie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 6:50:00 PM

Your friend is right -- Surprise! That aspartame in the diet - Cola is fashioned (originally) from rat feces. Check it out. Talk about 'fat' and 'fattening.' ~ Frightened and Frightening, gw

Terry Flood

Date: 11/2/2021 12:23:00 PM

I often shout at numpties on the radio. ‘We have canine teeth. These were given to us by God or evolution… Which are you denying?’ Love your poem, Gershon… (I don’t count all those giblets and creepy crawlies as meat) Good write. Terry

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 5:37:00 PM

'Numpties,' eh?! Had to google that one. Pretty funny. Thanks for the chuckle, Terry. :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/2/2021 12:12:00 PM

This also would make for a good witch's brew. Thanks for the recipe and the smile gw. Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/15/2021 3:05:00 PM

LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 5:52:00 PM

Oh, there are more recipes where this one came from, Linda. Just fill out my simple 23-page questionnaire about your weight-loss goals and dietary preferences -- and I'll send you a diet that'll have you tossing your cookies as soon as you look at it. lol. Thanks, and Keep Smiling, Gershon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/2/2021 11:51:00 AM

As I have said many time, forget taste as food need only be nourishing . . . . .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 6:42:00 PM

Some food is nourishing, but I prefer my taste buds flourishing ~ Perennial Dieter

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/1/2021 10:45:00 PM

Indeed...Give me meat with the side of meat. I hate these fancy diets...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 6:46:00 PM

Meet me at the meat market, Pashang! lol. Thanks for the visit and for writing the truth... Keep smiling, Gershon

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/1/2021 8:46:00 PM

(chuckling) It's always easier to put on than to take off...pounds, that is. But, I think I'd lose lots of this diet!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2021 5:59:00 PM

Just as long as you don't puke up your kishkes, my man! Keep smiling (Stop eating). lol. :) gw