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Rite of Passage

Rite of Passage

Ebon skin debutante
contemplating spring’s arrival,
counting blossom petals.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sambourne Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Your integration of painting to poetry is well crafted indeed. Your postings give much pleasure. Best wishes, Brian
Spilchuk Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Thank you very much for your kind remark and appreciation for Daniel Gerhartz's beautiful painting.
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